Tick Tock.

Tick Tock.

A Poem by John Holmes
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This is random.

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Their is no time.
ever moving
ever going

vanishing
vanishing
going
gone

tick tock.
goes the clock
as we watch
our lives
go on and on
never moving
never working

tick tock
goes the clock
as we watch opportunity
pass on by
like time.

tick tock
goes your clock
how long until the chime?

tell me.
How long? 

© 2014 John Holmes


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John Holmes
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I really like the concept of this poem. I think you've done a wonderful job of expressing the futility of life and how nothing can stop the progression of time. It is quite scary to think how little we are in control!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Added on June 23, 2013
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Tags: clock, time, death, life, opportunity, sadness, ticking, vanishing

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