Just some ideas on Life. How it is in essence a game, distorted by perception. Like a game of chess and we are all pieces, each move affecting another's.
I am really surprised you do not have more views/comments on this beautiful piece. It was nicely written with so many questions to ponder, answers we may never get. The game of life, such a wondrous mystery.
what is arrogance without vanity?
or pride without sin?
What are we mere mortals?
but pawns of perception
and of reflection?
Love this stanza, great job!!
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you so much! I also love that stanza!
I don't know, I don't have many people on here .. read moreThank you so much! I also love that stanza!
I don't know, I don't have many people on here so that might explain the lack of views etc.
I am really surprised you do not have more views/comments on this beautiful piece. It was nicely written with so many questions to ponder, answers we may never get. The game of life, such a wondrous mystery.
what is arrogance without vanity?
or pride without sin?
What are we mere mortals?
but pawns of perception
and of reflection?
Love this stanza, great job!!
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you so much! I also love that stanza!
I don't know, I don't have many people on here .. read moreThank you so much! I also love that stanza!
I don't know, I don't have many people on here so that might explain the lack of views etc.
nicely written.. so many questions we each carry and I wonder do we ever find the answers..
(a wee typo in this line: "and what sweet rules of life their are"..their=there)
:-)
Okay SO I am back everybody! Sorry for the long lapse in maintaining this account. I hope you're all well. Currently I stand at zero read requests, I came back to have far too many for me to ever catc.. more..