Be Damned

Be Damned

A Poem by The Outsider

Watch as your world floods, all that you knew is over run with the demons you could never get away from. All the people you loved are lost and all the love given to you vanishes because you weren't strong enough, this world on your shoulders was never meant to be carried only meant to crush and roll over and hope you may of had. The sense of drowning as all your demons smother you in hate, hide your soul and squeeze the life from every beat of your heart but never stopping it and never letting you die. Time slows as the devil whispers sweet tastes of hope in your ear knowing its never true but still believing every word. You listen closely to ever breathe as light becomes the friend you'll never see again, the only thing that could save you is dead and gone, all that's left is an eternal damnation of what once was but never will be again

© 2014 The Outsider


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Nice one, deep. ...makes me think if my subsistence is damnation or blessing.... I really like it, and can see the echoes of my thoughts in it :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very nice...the free verse you use is interesting, the content is, well...pretty much matching the title :P

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

uh oh upping the ante a little. i like this and i see ya! 8.6/10

Posted 10 Years Ago



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