Listen

Listen... listen as the world becomes calm, those few moments when all is still but only few can see, within the silence lies the answers to all your questions. Stop and look around, see as the demon and the angel within your soul battle for centuries as only seconds tick away. Watch as the time you never knew you had floats alway and dissapears into the abyss we call our minds. When you listen to the silence, our world speaks louder than ever before, and when you look into the darkness you'll realize its all a shadow of something greater. Then you will perceive things as they are instead of how they are disguised to be seen... shhh listen as the darkness speaks to you as the light it truly is.

Reviews

[Kasey Miriam]

the format of your poems makes them hard to read. It kills the flow and rythym and hides the meaning. My biggest sugestion is work on format and flow with your work.

[Jack Kennedy]

its cool but me personally might have to sit on this and re-read it later on.