My Black Hearted Princess

This is a song for my black hearted princess
this is a story engraved with pain
in the era when the need for destruction embraced the urge to love
in the era that the darkness took over my soul

So long we have been waiting
for that veil to be removed
'till so long reached forever
'till we were sick of waiting

Tears, oh tears
the most beautiful crystals
constructed with an honest pain
sparkling seeds of the eyes I love the most

Vulnerable at last
when the time comes
and the time came
for your sins to be paid

Right or wrong
Black or white
It really doesn't matter anymore
It's all just titles

I tried to show you the world
and day by day you lost your vision,

blinded by the misery.

You chose to live in your own version of reality.

Just hide your face from the world that hurts you
shut your eyes and I'm here in your darkest tower,
frozen by the fear of you
you are just a myth, my black hearted princess...

Reviews

[Cassiopia Summers]

I agree with tonymad11392, you could create a song out of this. Wonderful closing. (:

[tonymad11392]

this was excellent, you could use this for lyrics to a song, truly filled with honest and heartfelt emotions

[Aggie Skeleton]

That flowed really well and it was very uniqe.

[FocusedAmnesia]

Amazing read. It flowed wonderfully, and you could feel the emotion.

[Shalini Dinesh]

Very strong poem, i enjoyed reading it, to participate in the contest, i want you to dedicate it to someone, hope you read the rules of the contest fully and clearly... Good luck!

[Nancy S.]

Packed with the center of a soul, palpable with emotion and the verge of self awareness. I love the paced descent to the destruction of the illusion. Well done, TheOther.

[SilentDreamer]

I really like this poem. I favorite stanze was one and six. Very creative, great job.