Now that your gone

I just came up with it :) hope u like :)

When we were together,

I felt the warmth of your hands

I saw the excitment in your eyes

I heard your fullhearted laugh

 

Now that your gone,

I feel nothing

I see only disgust in the world

I hear nothing but the painful cries within me

 

Now that your gone,

I cannot feel the desire to laugh

I cannot see anything but ugly creatures in my pressence

I hear anything but your voice I am longing to hear once more

 

Now that your gone,

I feel no desire to live

I see no point in this life

I hear the voice drawing me closer to the dark

 

Now that your gone,

I feel only peace in this never ending hole

I see only my enlightened future in this haven

I hear only joyful jingle bells forcing me asleep..

Author's Note

Please ignor grammar problems :)

Reviews

[SkrillexLover :)]

thank you this was my first ever poem so i will take your advice and keep it in mind for my next poem

[Benyoucef]

Nice, but it was visible to the reader, hide your emotions to make people take the effort to reveal those curtains, because thisn is how they enjoy it

[A. V. Madison]

Gawjuzz daling.