still

still

A Poem by m.s.early

for a moment
i was able to be still.
hearts flew out of my hand
and i was able to see everyone.

i lacked everything comfortably,
and i could hear peace.

there was no loneliness
only echoes
of laughter healing all that shared it so.

© 2018 m.s.early


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A wonderful poem shared. A reflection on life. The echoes of things can make the silence, a time of story remembered. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.,
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


i love the line..." i lacked everything comfortably" and wish i had written that one...just that concept...to have nothing and still be happy, just to have peace and friendship...and hearts rather than things...
yep, beautiful idea--
j.

Posted 5 Years Ago


I love this becuz it's so unexpected. I love that every line is a fresh way to say each thing you're saying. I love how you use "still" to mean so much more than that. I really love the way you depict being "still" . . . so that it's even better than love or joy (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Gee
That sounds like bliss. The world never seems to pause or sleep, the continual hum of life and living droning ever on. I've contemplated having an hour in a flotation tank just to escape for a wee while.
I like this piece, it sets ya mind to thinking.


Posted 5 Years Ago


Finding stillness is an art and a blessing, and this poem is a lovely expression of that truth

Posted 5 Years Ago


m.s.early

5 Years Ago

Thank so kindly
I wish I could find mine again...peace that is...ive miss placed it somewhere while cleaning, I think. Happy New year X...Look deep into her eyes....sleep nestled next to her spirit....she'll be your peacekeeper :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Wow! deep really, but nice writing

Posted 5 Years Ago


Sounds like a near death experience. It would be interesting to develop it further.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sounds like a quiet moment to behold

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

m.s.early

5 Years Ago

Thank you for the thoughts. 😊
 wordman

5 Years Ago

you`re welcome

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"A poet's work is to name the unnameable, to point at frauds, to take sides, start arguments, shape the world, and stop it going to sleep." -Salman Rushdie more..

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