in the morning

I am in the morning again,
your hair pushed against.
It's scent relentless. Still with me.

Sleeping then seeing you,
having you, braced and forward.
Your hair hanging heavily on each breath of mine.

Your intoxicating air is sexy intriguing.
I am wanting and captivated.
Here. Once again.
In the morning.

Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

...love, love, love your closing stanza! So briefly, beautifully expressed.

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This is stunning, sensual and so elegant. Starz

[Ted Kniffen]

Well done, M..S. A true song of love. There are a couple of issues with punctuation, but nothing huge. As I said, there is love here. Good write.

[Corset]

Stanza two is effortlessly erotic, very tastefully done.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

My coffee overflows this morning and I think I need a cigarette (I haven't smoked in over ten years) 49 views and I am the only comment?I know it's about personal preference... but I've always had great taste:) your work should be out there X....it is worthy!!!!!

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

Using that magic again I see......