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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
belfast

belfast

A Poem by m.s.early

a pen by the telephone 
harvest gold telephone
broken ink embryos yet to drain
naked lines real enough to cast
on train rails from the heart
stretching like strings of a dulcimer
ringing like the rattling feathers
of angel wings
stretching the span of his mind
back twenty years or more
play that song, Shawn
the one that reminds him
of the prostitutes
along the walls of Belfast Mill
where the chimney reeks
of womens' fingers spoiling
as they weave and spin
he wishes to slip into hazy dreams of Ireland
and whisky drenched memories
of long ago
the silent telephone
holds it secrets
like a pen that will not write
but then it did ring
taking him by surprise
the line connecting from miles away
and it sounded like the smile
he swore he’d return to someday
but her city was sworn
to never have sidewalks graced
by his boots ever again
but rather the harvest gold
appliance rang and rang 
while the night surrendered 
as the one before
while lamenting he’d 
never see Belfast again

© 2015 m.s.early


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Beautifully penned and so atmospheric. I could
almost be there, I was there in fact and you have
taken me back!

Posted 8 Years Ago


ink embryos, nice man, i like that

Posted 9 Years Ago


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A memoir that is delivered with poise. You do not shy away from skillful metaphors and vivid personifications which make the city come alive. And the reader is left with so many questions.. why this and why that..? Mine is - was she warm?

Posted 9 Years Ago


so good to come back to words like these

Posted 9 Years Ago


So well written, so finely attuned to the senses. The longing is palpable, the imagery stark and incredibly well drawn.

I really, really enjoyed this.


Beccy.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Irish wiskey,on a lonley night.Great story telling, looking out a window.............

Posted 9 Years Ago


the silent telephone
holds it secrets
like a pen that will not write.

Great prescription there. Love it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


but the pen will write, and yours is doing just that...and i can see and smell the smoke, see the prostitutes lined up against the walls...and i hear that phone ringing with words on the other end.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Hi X,

We meet again on poet's turf that is sure to sound like a tumulus congratulation. Most times one can pick out a line or two or three that really turned my head but damn it the whole damn thing was one great line.

Regards,

Al

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Xavier, this is beautiful and transcendant. You transport me to Ireland and seas of green grass in the meadows. I can see the gold telephone of a lonely cottage in Belfast. This one is ripe with heartache and what ifs...very well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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