pop a cork

Pop a cork and knock it off

The monkey’s on the table

A penny earned, a dollar burned

Happy and unstable

When in doubt we’ll laugh it off

And toss it out the window

Light a smoke, wheeze and choke

And make an innuendo

Smack her butt and blow it off

And start it up again

Scream and shout and throw me out

What’s a joke between good friends

Reviews

[paul sal.....]

anyone seen my empty bottle of ketchup?

[Frieda P]

This was fun and obnoxious, but I think that's what you were going for x....cheers!

[Woody]

very funny piece here. love the rhythm and the rhyme.
indeed what's a joke between good friends?

[Claire in VA]

The Bugs Bunny episode "The Hillbilly Hare"
comes to mind here! I can just see Bugs Bunny
on the fiddle singing this rollicking song while
the other characters act it out.

VERY different and VERY good indeed!

[kublakhan27]

'A penny earned, a dollar burned'...love that line, it sounds very much how I feel at the end of the month when all the bills are due...great command of the meter and rhyme scheme...the flow works well with the wry humour too...three great stanzas, all with cool imagery...great piece x.

[Rita L. Sev]

Well, didn't THAT make me smile? A rhythmic piece of silly here, Xavier, very much enjoyed!

[Brittany Zedalis]

╰☆╮This is really catchy. ^-^╰☆╮

[Lyn Anderson]

Sounds like a party well done

[Alfred Kukitz]

The problem here is my finger nails are clean. Quick Al go get some grime from the likes of Silver who shines in the likes of old town fun. Nice stuff kid!