feather float down and settle like young love in hearts united

feather float down and settle like young love in hearts united

softly sway in wafting breeze carrying in happenstance design

there go weighing lids on eyes drooping in lazy lingering

anticipate harmony in each slowing breath for love is e'er benign

there go marrying minds youthful growth no, never ceasing

there to flow they move through sleep and drift abreast in time

even still in one accord slip into resting star shaped dreams

where morrow's lapse within reasoning state rings true in every rhyme

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

In each verse of romance you bring harmony to love...Excellent...:)............

[Corset]

This is a truly beautiful verse, very romantic and endearing, it's a lovely read and a little different from you that I've read so far but no less in that regard, I love to read beautiful poetry, when poets write about the more tender feelings that come, I have always had a hard time formulating love into thoughts on paper, but this flows beautifully.