lips of the queen

A smile on a cool steel breeze,

Forever in the eyes of the queen.

Her slow silver tongue and her lips move together

Like children singing in Spring.

My toes dip testing her water;

The strength of her current ever reaching.

Her tide is a swelling melody,

And I lay crashed on her beaches.

If every word was beautiful,

Then every one of her.

Her soft tender skin, rose petals divine,

Her eyes unrelenting pierce mine.

Reviews

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

Of all the queens, I wanted to be the queen of hearts....but have always rendered myself in spades. No diamonds or lucky clovers here....yet still a queen.I am putting this back into the treasure chest. so many favorites I have from you! Happy Hallo X!

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

I wonder if we all consider ourselves queens in our own right.....I have conquered many things but not all of my fears. Maybe I am just a princess in Queens attire. I am going to babble for a few days. This wacky weather has me spinning!

[h d e rushin]

I love this language, semiabstract and easily recognizable although the form is stylized. This has
a classical current running through it, the queen as women who is so authorized to perform
the sacred rights of love and divinity. A wonderful love poem in apperance and validity.

well written

dana

[Alfred Kukitz]

X. Silver you could dazzle the country in your dance with words!

[s y e]

Woweee, this is spectacular!!! I think every woman should be cherished by the one who loves her, he should cherish and love her more than anyone.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

Can I have your mother's phone number? I need to call her and tell her she has done an amazing job...and get some pointers on how to raise a charming, amazing, talented son!? :) YOU always leave me breathless X!

[Corset]

Every woman loved is a queen, cherished, doted upon, lovely verse.

[LadyAnn68]

wonderful idea and feels the words excellent poem.

[Saddam]

If every word was beautiful,
Then every one of her.
Her soft tender skin, rose petals divine,
Her eyes unrelenting pierce mine.

Beautiful poetry. I really enjoyed it...

[Rita L. Sev]

Wonderful, almost ethereal images, Xavier. Ah, the silver-tongued temptress... Well penned!