wreck on main street

wreck on main street

A Poem by m.s.early
"

This is not autobiographical

"
Spring breeze
Cherry blossoms and magnolia blooms
Squirrels crossing power lines
Bells from the Methodist church across town
My neighbor throws seed for the black birds
She waves and smiles before the front door swallows her inside

Suddenly there's a wreck on main street
It's my cousin and she may be dying
Her skin became a bag for broken bones in just a second
Everything that was structure
Is now flowing chaotically inside  of her
The blood in her veins is stoned
And refuses to stay in the vessels

There's a clavicle in her lung now

Unaffected by the cacophony of sirens
A Mockingbird calls from an Oak
He sounds like a squirrel barking
Then he sounds like a Jay

He reminds me of a musician 
Stealing melodies from the air 
And replacing them with interpretation

Out of the blue I crave a cigarette
Count the years since my last one

There are more sirens now
Police and rescue squads and EMTs
But I won't go see
My neighbor comes running outside and screams at me
from her porch
Her birds scatter like leaves in the wind 
and fly over my yard
Their wings pelt the air 
So fast
Like I imagine her heart by now
Pumping blood recklessly
Pumping blood out of her faster than her body can create it

I glare at my neighbor 
I won't bother to explain it to her
She sees her screaming won't make me go see
She stands silent for a moment
Confounded
She gives up and goes back inside

Another neighbor's dog
Noses its way along the road's edge
Its tail wagging lazily
I wonder if it can smell trouble

I text my sisters
I tell them she's really done it this time
Let's see if her mother can get her out of this one

In the meantime I can tell
The rose bushes are going to be really pretty this year

© 2016 m.s.early


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Xavier, this could be a family member from any family on the planet. You've described a wrenching scene that is all too often acted out on the highways of our land, many times with teenagers with too much time and foolishness on their hands...sometimes people never grow up. Thank you for sharing this vivid poem. I like the honesty, the structure and the tone that you've weaved throughout. Excellent write, my friend!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Some times tough love is the only option. You cannot help those whom do not help themselves. It is hard to separate. The separation is imperative if both parties are ever gong to have a chance. I have had to separate myself from a great many things and people over the years...My life went on even if theirs stood still...the world went on..the earth spinning, the clouds gathering, the birds flying....double sided...connected yet separate. I read your works and I wonder always what struggles and achievements bring you to the soulful moments of writing. It seems as if the words just flow onto the paper with a whimsy that is rarely seen anymore. Your talent is extraordinary!

Posted 10 Years Ago


You have penned wonderfully some daily events in the life of a poet, some great instances and images as if to transport your reader to the scenes and be there as eye witnesses too. Excellent...:)..............

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Posted 10 Years Ago


A Poet's world is real to them - what imagination! Such observation, that is what I love about your writing x

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Posted 10 Years Ago


i like how you mix the emotions and intensity of the moment with the distraction of mundane things...the nosy neighbor...the rose bushes...

the dog's tail wagging....

you really painted a picture here...i was totally engaged..

i like you prefaced this with it not being autobiographical...based on some reactions i get to my pieces, i might have to do that...
we create...but are often taken so literally...oh well...
this is a really smart piece...but i have to leave it now, cause i have to go see for myself what happened out in the street---you made it so real.

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Posted 10 Years Ago



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