Very clever, when I spied the title didn't dawn on me what it was all about, good thing you didn't pick the G-string. ;-) Love a man that plays guitar, just saying.
being a guitar player this struck me in a wonderful way. I can picture the child, proud as can be with his one stringed guitar singing to anyone who will listen. Going through life, watching time pass with his one string, his best friend, who watches with him. Very cool my friend.
like Divya said, what a metaphor as that string grows, the child changes...and changes the world...i was part of his growth, now i rest in a velvet case, feeling i have contributed to his growth, and can rest now.
Great metaphor used here by you. Life is a musical note...we are the strings of a musical instrument... needing just the right tuning to try and make music that could make the world more melodius. A delightful note from you Xavier.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you so much Divya. I really appreciate you interpretation. :)
Awesome penning of the comparisons between a boy and the e string.Truly genius :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
(: thank you Vidya... what no tongue? :P
10 Years Ago
Ha and you thought I could not behave .Now you sticking out ur tongue at me ?lol.You are welcome Xav.. read moreHa and you thought I could not behave .Now you sticking out ur tongue at me ?lol.You are welcome Xavier :P
Great write, when tightening the string it get tuned and better, just like a boy get tuned for the future one step at a time basis, later trainer or parent takes some rest and boy is ready to make the symphony of life way efficiently than the trainer, best way to go, but everyone is not fortunate to get that ideal training, enjoyed
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Indeed Linda. Thank you very much for your thoughts :)
how a single string as a single note had been learned and nurtured by the boy until it became part of him. in accompaniment, the single note burgeoned into a song that evoked his inner wisdom. it's amazing when you think about how symphonies had originated with a few simple notes.
This verse has a story...
from what was when all the strings played...
and now there is only one...
and the bond begins again...
with a child and his one string...
and develops back...
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you Glen, I really appreciate your thoughts. Thank you for reading :)
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