her name

There is grace in her throat when she sings my name;

it is wet on her lips perched like doves 

in the roses taking flight.

Once her breasts heave and the air is flushed,

my name raises avidly in bi-tonal fluted chords,

bracing her elbows against my chest

and struggling to release her harmony

in my patient ears.

My love stews her name viciously.

It is katzenjammer and clangor

once it pumps from my diaphragm deranged,

a din fracturing the air around us;

its potency observed when my hands grip her waist

and clutch her to delve in her,

to withdraw from her.

Her name is planed between abrasive clenched jaws

while mine flitters gently back down among us.

Hers is replaced by devouring it, becoming it

while mine licks her lips with glistening

and waits to kiss again.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"My love stews her name viciously.

It is katzenjammer and clangor
once it pumps from my diaphragm deranged,
a din fracturing the air around us;"

Another splendid poem from your mighty pen...:)...................

[m.s.early]

(: thank you Sami. I thought you'd like the katzenjammer line... haven't seen the word on here yet :)

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:)...................

[Tina Louise UK]

Passionate piece, really enjoyed :) x

[m.s.early]

(: thank you Tia :)

[Rita L. Sev]

What's in a name? In this piece, it is passion. Well done, Xavier!

[m.s.early]

(: thank you so much Rita... by any other name is just as... :)

[BlackRose]

Oooh, NICE! Loved it the moment I started reading it. Names flutter with every heartbeat spoken. Eyes engage, emerging faint burst nectur'd. To go forth savoring the roseate supple invite, soon cavasing equisite slavored interior.

[m.s.early]

How elegant BlackRose... I wonder why that first verse caught you ;)

[BlackRose]

I wonder, I mean what's in a name, hmm... Thou've words fluid thou lips. ;o)

[Claire in VA]

To be the object of this poet's desire!
I continue to be amazed and enthralled with
your writing talents.
I am honored to know you.

~~~~Claire~~~~

[m.s.early]

Oh goodness, Claire. You're flattering me. Thank you :)