incorporeal

She keeps asking. "When did you know?"

As if it were palpable, appreciable, a thing.

How do you assess the ethereal birth of a notion?

I heard a throbbing. I became incorporeal.

There was less in between.

I pronounced the matter. That is all.

The moment was formless, eternal, unbodied.

I never knew. I always knew. I let her know.

Reviews

[paul sal.....]

you know by the distant look in her eyes as you try to fill in the in between, which is an imagining of unknown truths; I think..........

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is deep and thought-provoking. Bravo!

[m.s.early]

(: Thank you Brittany :)

[Rehan Roy]

You have with great depth depicted the nature of true love, which affects beyond this physical dimension and get percieved beyond these carnal senses.This is a great composition.

[m.s.early]

I've read and respect your work, poet, so this is indeed a compliment. Thank you.

[Rehan Roy]

Seriously saying, this piece is a thinking of a higher dimension. For this piece, hats off!

[Frieda P]

Deep and profound x....good question, sometimes it's better to just leave some things to waft into the ether and not question why, love never appears tangible, besides, it takes all the mystery out of passion.

[m.s.early]

(: thank you Frieda :)

[Frieda P]

Welcome, I feel sorry for 'her' though, you must drive her mad ;-)

[m.s.early]

HA! HA! HA!

[Sugar Plum ♥]

This piece sounds like to "speak out the inexpressible" , to go to depths of something which is hard to grasp...nothing last forever, even this moment, when we talk and write..the moment to "death" is ethereal ,eternal...Knowing about is so hard and so much in the hand of spirit.

I heard a throbbing. I became incorporeal.
There was less in between.

This "less between" could be bigger space, but is left without words.

::n.nour::
::03.014::

[Anne Lyons]

Simple and conveys so much!

[Linda alexander]

How do you assess the ethereal birth of a notion?

I heard a throbbing. I became incorporeal.
There was less in between.
Muse keep on asking when poet knew heavenly birth of poem, or an theme for poem, poet says it is spontaneous as if he knew same time born without his knowledge, this is so true with certain master piece work of some artist or writer, it comes as magical, spontaneous and as if some spirits made him write, not him, very intrigue, makes all the sense in the world, really enjoyed, congrats

[m.s.early]

Thank you Linda. I believe poems and love both are eternal, and eternal reaches in both directions. :)

[Linda alexander]

You welcome, I wonder how come God gave you more brain cells, but not for me, this is pure partiality

You most welcome, my pleasure

[Shirlena]

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I Love it, love it, love it...such drama and mystery and well spoken. I was so intrigued. NOW DATS What I MEAN Ya'll. GIVE IT TA MEH! I'm sorry I get really excited sometimes reading good stuff. EXCELLENT!!!! I would save it my library but my computer's stupid so I'll come back for it and OH it will be mine.

[m.s.early]

You're passion is contagious Sirlena! Thank you for such enthusiasm.

[Shirlena]

U are so welcomed.

[Ars Goetia Poetry]

Such a thought provoking piece. Love your bio btw :)

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

....He was born a poet....from farther than the recesses could see...know...exist...somethings are just....

[m.s.early]

Somethings are indeed... thank you for reading Queenie :)

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

Her soul walks....maybe she can't tell...but your right....at that moment....she'll know.