in now

in now

A Poem by m.s.early

to think is to exist in this now
beyond which no further moment lies,
no minus moments to conceive,
no longer being to recollect.
though now is but one note in the great harmony,
now is all there is to be;
its faith, its note to resonate;
its crescendos, its legacy.
now is a breath on a wind waiting.
now is a spawn of motion.
in now exist galore...

© 2014 m.s.early


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Thought provoking, beautiful piece :) x

Posted 10 Years Ago


to think is to exist in this now
beyond which no further moment lies,
no minus moments to conceive,
Eat the dessert of the life first which is this minute, the whole essence of life cleverly put as a poem, bravo, excellently met the goal, so now readers have to work towards it, poet's job well done

Posted 10 Years Ago


m.s.early

10 Years Ago

(: thank you so much Linda :)
Linda alexander

10 Years Ago

You most welcome, but for you to know that message is not easy to follow as you wrote, eating the br.. read more
We live in moments, those that resonate stay with us in the now...to think is to take it all in and make it work for today in this moment. I like this one xavier, I kind of tripp'd a wee bit over that last line, 'exists' possibly work better and change the adverb to 'in abundance' or something like that.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Frieda P

10 Years Ago

I got it, it's your baby, take poetic license whenever you like ;-)
m.s.early

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your interest Frieda. I do appreciate your thoughts :)
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Was my pleasure, you know I love your stuff ;-)
Liked your poem....Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


m.s.early

10 Years Ago

(: thank yo us o much daniel :)
I've learned over the years to try and live in the "now" and not worry about the past or the future. This is really awesome. I love the word crescendo. Been hearing it a lot lately in my music education class, haha.

Posted 10 Years Ago


m.s.early

10 Years Ago

Awesome... I love music classes :) Thanks for reading :)
I would love to live in the now.However my mind frantically calculates every cause and effect .This is really nice Xavier :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


m.s.early

10 Years Ago

Mine too Vidya. lol. That's what inspired this. There are a few things that bring me into the "now",.. read more
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are welcome and I really did :)

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