separated souls

two separated souls as distant as worlds

strumming out verses harmonically true,

universal expansion and asteroids hurled

meteors bursting, cosmic symphonic stew,

two separated souls in tongues just they knew

singing choruses wherefore even heavens hushed;

abreast vacuum of space, galaxies birthing anew,

plangent refrains as from church organs rushed.

wherein pining souls, their tones sweetly blushed,

as terms dubbed in curved space-time construed,

moments assembled like hair finely brushed

as threads of the universe combed thin and hued.

each preceding stanza primes another it seems;

two separated souls joined by concordant dreams.

Reviews

[Ahena MK]

wherein pining souls, their tones sweetly blushed,
as terms dubbed in curved space-time construed,
moments assembled like hair finely brushed
as threads of the universe combed thin and hued....................

[m.s.early]

(: thank you for reading Ahena :)

[Lyn Anderson]

You are the master, my friend -- do I make you blush, and how many women wonder, is this for me? So well crafted -- beautiful.

[m.s.early]

(: Thank you KL... Nice to see you again :)

[Daniel Dawes]

Really good read.......Your use of words expresses this poem perfectly. Thanks for sharing :)

[m.s.early]

(: Thank you Daniel :)

[Sami Khalil]

I like the last lines the best. A good write...:)................

[m.s.early]

(: Thank you Sami :)

[Sami Khalil]

o ar muchly...:)...........

[Vidya Bacchus]

Wow Xavier this is ....i am at a lost for words that could adequately describe your poem.It is indescribably lovely :)

[m.s.early]

Aww... thank you Vidya... how gracious :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome for sure :)