let me change the subject

let me change the subject

and we'll forget about the pensive verses

and awkward pauses

and go back to soft cuddles on the couch

Reviews

[redflutterby]

Sweet thought here...the best things about love are the simplest. Lovely...;-)

[DaughterNature]

Cute! Almost reminds me of the Simon and Garfunkel song "The Dangling Conversation."

[s y e]

I love snuggling up on the sofa with a hot chocolate and watching a movie; I just love the cuddling and getting to be close to the one you love. Sounds like heaven to me.

[Rita L. Sev]

As if it were that easy... ;) I like the simplicity your words bring to such a complex thing as a relationship.

[Sami Khalil]

"let me change the subject

and we'll forget about the pensive verses

and awkward pauses

and go back to soft cuddles on the couch"

[Mockingbird]

i would want nothing more than to cuddle on the couch. there need not be words to feel closeness and intimacy. cuddling can be all you need for comfort and reassurance.

[m.s.early]

(: so sweet is the sentiment of cuddling. The translation of wordless conversation is unnecessary between lovers, their hearts being transparent to one another. Thank you for reading :)

[Frieda P]

You wish, it's not that easy, I meant really great sentiment here xavier ;-) Really I like, I really do....

[m.s.early]

(: don't I know it sister... 😉 thanks Frieda :)

[Frieda P]

Haha, I figured it was just wishful thinking....... ;-)

[Sami Khalil]

Good bread, good love, let's eat...Did I forget anything...Just kidding...
A very good poem...:).............

[Linda alexander]

Great write, simple, straightforward, and really poetic

[m.s.early]

(: thank you linda :)

[Linda alexander]

You most welcome, take care

[Jack...]

Couldn't have said it better myself. Very nice X

[m.s.early]

(: thank you jack :)