A Fawns New Dawn

I am trying to express the innocence, wonder, and beauty of the natural world from the perspective of a baby fawn. The poem describes the delicate and tender connection between the fawn and the world

As dawn softly whispers its arrival
And each new day unfurls its canvas
Within the gentle expanse of a meadow
There beats the little heart of a baby fawn
Innocence and fragility intertwined
As it wanders through the world so vast
Seeking solace in a mother's embrace
Amongst the shadows that cast their veil
Amidst the golden hues of morning's embrace
A symphony of nature's secrets take flight
Birdsong and wisps of wind share their stories
Unveiling the wonders that surround
With measured footsteps draped in grace
The baby fawn explores, filled with wonder
Beneath the verdant carpet of lush grass
Discovering the treasures hidden within
In the embrace of the morning's light
A bond begins to form, tying earth and creature
A tender connection between nature's gifts
And the heart of the little fawn
Amidst the whispers of the wind's caress
And the melodies sung by the birds
The little heart of the fawn dances with joy
In sync with the rhythm of life's stillness
Within the meadow's vast embrace
A world of possibilities unveils itself
For the sweet innocent fawn to explore
And find the beauty that awaits its steps
Oh, precious fawn with eyes so wide
May each day's whispers guide your way
May your heartbeats be your compass
Leading you to the wonders that lie ahead.

Author's Note

Will this be acceptable for a good piece of work?

Reviews

[Mint Rayne]

Hi Richie, I love the way you introduced the the day. I love poems and your created a great mind dance for me. A very enjoyable poem