Mommy's Little Disaster

I was actually influenced to write this, I'd like to thank all of the mothers out there who let their daughters grow up to soon! Give yourselves a pat on the back! :D [Sarcasm to the extremeee]

 

Mommy’s Little Disaster

 

Mommy’s little girl was only seven

She had the world, her little heaven

Her room was filled with toys

And other unnecessary childish things

Sesame Street was always on the TV set

And she was spoiled as ever

On her eighth birthday

Mommy’s little girl wanted Barbie

So Mommy got it for her

Even though it was a plastic piece of crap

Years passed and the little girl grew

She seen her chest and said, “Hmm…that’s new”

Still so young at the age of eleven

The little girl began to watch boys

Delight filled her eyes when they watched back

Mommy’s little girl wanted one of her own

So Mommy granted her wish

Although she was scared for her little girl

Time flies when you’re having fun!

Says the little girl on the run

She knew that her body was bangin’

Now, when she turned fifteen

Little girl had the boys in the bag

Was a well known volleyball player

But it was almost her sweet sixteen

Mommy’s little girl wanted that nice car

So, yes you guessed it, Mommy got it

No matter what bad thoughts roamed in her head

It was four years ago now

When little girl questioned ‘how?’

It was an accident; she didn’t mean to fail school

Or get into trouble from drunk driving

She was lost in confusion and anger

Ah, high school was a blast though

Who cares that she didn’t go to college?

Mommy’s little girl wanted to let go of life

Well, ‘if that’s what she wants’ Mommy thought

 

 

Mommy’s little girl didn’t die, but she gave up what her life could’ve been

Maybe parents should do what’s better for their children and not what they want…

 

 

 

Author's Note

Ignore the grammar issues! Give me your opinion

Reviews

[Frank F. Atanacio]

wonderful write, very good and the style different but easy to follow thanks for sharing this piece and enjoy your little one :)

[Dini]

What more is there to say? Amazing.

[Jay Jay]

this is incredibly true...i really think that the more parents spoil their kids the worse off their going to be! good write. love the format.

[Winter McPherson]

I think one of the worst things you can do to a child is give them everything they want. They will have a most unhappy adult life. Becuz adults usually never get everything they want........sometimes not even a little bit of what they want. This sets a child up for disillusion and lack of independence.

Thanks for making a great point!

[Cam]

Completely 100% true!
Parents shouldn't just go out of way to buy everything and anything their kid wants.
Kids need to work for things, and get experience or they are gonna be lost when they are going out into the real world.

[Jude]

I love the topic
it's real to the fullest
and I agree with your moral
well done
keep going you're talented

[universalove]

I HAVE SEVEN DAUGHTERS. I CAN UNDERSTAND THAT NATURE TAKES IT COURSE. AND ALL WE CAN DO IS TEACH THEM WHAT IS RIGHT AND WHAT IS WRONG FOR THEM TO SEE WERE THEY MIGHT GO. WRITTEN VERY WELL.

[Sean Allen]

Nice title, great use of color, beautiful idea... I hardly know you, but the professionalism of this piece that you have written here amazes me.

By the way, have you noticed how two children raised exactly the same way by their parents will often end up total opposites?

[Michael Carr]

this is a very great piece.
powerful and emotionally effected disguised beneath a vale of bitter humor.
the style is the most striking, mainly because it doesn't distract the reader from the piece, but instead enhances the experience.
a very good write.
well done. :)

[Voice]

Wow this is good is this kinda based on sarah i know you said you got her email have you used it? anyway this is really good when you come over will you show me how to do the cool things with the word please??? oh and see even mr. yeast thinks your a good writer :)