Gatelife

Written for a contest.

When winter becomes thee
We shall see from afar
The way you truly are.
 

And I believe you'll be
The blackest star
When winter becomes thee.
 

Yes I believe you'll be
In the quickest tar
And a sideborne jar
When winter becomes thee.

Reviews

[Sylla Rege'ne]

It flows so beautifully and wonderfully. It makes me contemplate who anyone truly is, and what behavior is truly a facade. I really do enjoy it! (along with the rest of your poems! I'm officially a big fan!) :)

[Helen Crutchett]

What an intriguing write. Loved it! Thank you for submitting
this to Poeticpiers contest. ~ Helena