Or Perhaps He Just Fears Birds

Written for a cascade poem contest.

Fear

Through air

Flies swiftly

Towards my eye

And this man will die

By the end of our night

When a shrieking will rise up

Drowning out the light and promise

Consuming the world with fell shadow 

Reviews

[Shane William]

Very nice structure and form of course. Reading the words made me imagine getting into a fight with another man and how the anger takes you to a dark place.