Such Is The Kingdom Of Mold

Such Is The Kingdom Of Mold

A Poem by The Message

I felt

Unease

And the cackle breathes

Out a sigh of relief

Relief and disbelief

And I rose

Anew

For I felt a hungering

For that nameless thing in the cellar

I rose

Lumbering

Back to the weary throne

With my hunger

For that nameless thing in the cellar

© 2009 The Message


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The Message
The grammer... isn't. I'm aware, it's on purpose.

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Its kind of foreboding....

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love how you can feel, hear and see what going on in this poem and yet it remains quite vague. Love it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Gives a very omnious air with plenty of room for imagination to fill in the blanks. I ususally end up writing kinda long stuff, but I really like it when so much is conveyed in so few words. Great job here.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on September 14, 2009

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