Don't Give Up

Fighting the Darkness,
letting the light
brighten you up...
is a sign of WEAKNESS!

Do not give up the Darkness
that lingers in your flowing blood.
Fight the light instead,
let it cower, let Darkness
conquer, let no light in you.

Be like me!
Embrace the pain,
Embrace the blood,
 Embrace the sharpness in objects.
More importantly...
EMBRACE THE DARKNESS!

Do not give up the Darkness.
Never give up the Darkness.
Fight the light, embrace the Darkness.

Just...
embrace the Darkness.

Author's Note

Wrote this last week, it's kinda of a "rushed" poem, but what do you think?!

Reviews

[eeoopig]

Wow - I love your poems- they really capture the darker side of things. To me it doesn't seem that rushed - just fast flowing! Great job I love this and all your poems :) keep writing

[TC Dunn]

I know you said that you wrote this in a rush but it doesn't seem that way. I love the "embrace the darkness" message. So very different from the lighter poetry I read, but beautiful nevertheless and very captivating.