A Stranger

wild west poem I created out of the blue

year: 1878

A Stranger is outside
somewhere in the barren hills
A Stranger is feared by many people
because they don't know where he came from
some people say that he came from hell itself
a lot of gangs that terrorize the people
 want to kill him and prove they are strong
but most of the time they disappear
once they have been found
they are dead
with something carved on their forehead
which is an eye

A Stranger is sometimes seen
petting a wild animal
sometimes riding a bear
up in them forests
he rarely appears in town
when he is, he wanders, buying more ammo
with money from the gangs he killed
he rarely talks

A Stranger usually wears a duster coat
that flaps in the wind
he have a beard and a mustache
that seems to hide all the bottom part of the face
and a long hair that covers the entire back head
the hair partial covered the forehead

the sheriff often try to catch him
once they put him in jail
within first look-away
he's gone
back into the wild
some rumors from the campfires said that he lives
in a large ghost town in the north
of them hills where cannibalism occurs

Modern Time

In multiple cities in Texas
A Stranger is well known
for killing criminals
the police today dislike his vigilante
so they often tries to catch him
once they look away
he disappeared
back in the small portion of wilderness
that Texas is quickly running out of

there is no stopping A Stranger
not even death

Author's Note

some random wild west/modern poem I created out of the blue, anyhow criticism is like music to my ear

Reviews

[Perfect Mistake]

Loves the story that it tells. gives a lot of desccription on the stranger but never gives name, i like that; its like knowing someone that is unknown.

[RickyLevick]

DAMN wow,
my Creative Writing teacher would love this
as a matter of fact i certainly do