![]() The ProductA Story by Bobby Madden![]() I'll just call this an action thriller.![]() “I figured this would
just be another day on the job. Now, here we are, stuck in the break room while
a gang of strangers overtake this facility. We’re hostages. F*****g hostakes. Who
knows what’s gonna happen? They could kill us,” said McGregor, sitting at a
round white table with his two co-workers. McGregor was a thirty-year-old white
male in a white lab coat. His medium length black hair was combed back, and it
was shiny and hard from gel. “If they wanted to kill us they would have done it
by now,” said Simmons, with his hands below the table, his head lowered, and
his cold eyes looking straight ahead. Simmons was a twenty-eight Hispanic male,
and he had a similar white lab coat to that of McGregor, with brown hair on the
top of his head combed to the side; the sides and back were cleanly shaven. He
was slightly taller and thinner than McGregor. “So why are we stuck in here?”
asked McGregor. “They need us for something, but it’s not time for our
involvement yet,” said Simmons, everything motionless except for his mouth. “Do
you know who they are?” asked McGregor, with his palms open. “They have to be
thieves,” said Simmons, with his unbroken gaze. “What do they want? Money? This
isn’t a f*****g bank!” said McGregor, throwing his hands up in the air and
letting them fall onto his lap. “What do you know of in this facility that has
value?” asked Simmons, with no determinable emotion in his voice. “They can’t
be after that…” said McGregor, creasing the area between his brows. McGregor’s eyes lit up
with fire. “After dedicating myself to creating that s**t, some filthy f*****g
thugs want to take it for themselves and expect me to assist them somehow?! I’m
gonna throw up…” said McGregor, putting his left hand to his forehead. “It
could be worse,” said Garoth, sounding optimistic. Garoth was twenty-six and Filipino.
He had a similar white lab coat to that of his partners and the shortest black
mohawk a person could have. “Yeah, how?” McGregor asked, turning to Garoth,
folding his hands on the table. “They could torture us for their own pleasure,”
said Garoth, shrugging his shoulders. “That might be worse for you but not for
me. I’d rather take powdered glass to my eyes than watch a bunch of scumbags
walk away with my work!” declared McGregor, pointing at his chest with his
right pointer finger. “Our work,” contested Garoth, raising his eyebrows.
“Didn’t say it was just mine. If I had a son and referred to him as my son,
would that mean he was just mine? He’d be the son of whoever I impregnated
too,” argued McGregor. “Okay. Don’t PMS on me now,’ urged Garoth, raising his
hands like he had a gun pointed at him. “You know what? I want coffee,”
announced McGregor, slamming his hands flat on the table and getting out of his
seat. “Are you out of your mind?” asked Garoth, as if McGregor was about to
teabag a toaster. “The only thing that tall f**k in the gas mask said was that
anyone who left this room would be shot on sight, and I wasn’t gonna sit in
that chair all goddamn night,” explained McGregor, going over to the coffee
machine. “What if we have to
piss?” asked Garoth, sounding genuinely concerned. “There’s a sink right over
here,” said McGregor, putting coffee grounds into a filter. “Fair enough. So
what do we do? Just stay in here until we’re told to come out?” asked Garoth,
turning his attention toward Simmons. “If you wanna storm out hoping you don’t
get shot, go ahead,” said Simmons, wearing the same cold expression. “Are there
any weapons here?” asked Garoth, looking around as if expecting to find one he
hadn’t seen throughout the many times he had been in that room. “A coffee pot
might hurt,” said McGregor, turning on the machine, leaning against the counter
with his left arm, and smiling with an open mouth. “I guess that’s a no. Why
would they want the product in the first place?” wondered Garoth, his eyes on
Simmons again. “Do you how many banks you’d have to rob to make the amount of
money the product is worth?” asked Simmons, leaving Garoth silent for about
five seconds. “How do they even know about it?” inquired Garoth, leaning in
with hands folded on the table, expecting Simmons to have an answer to every
question of his. “Maybe there’s a mole in the lab,” said Simmons, leaving no
indication as to whether he knew or not. “If there is, it’s McGregor. Did you
hear that McMuffin? I think you’re a mole. Does that make you mad?” said
Garoth, raising his voice as if McGregor was far away. McGregor whistled Hey
Baby by No Doubt as he watched the coffee brew, acting like he didn’t hear him.
“Jameson,” said Simmons, his eyes piercing the abyss. “The new guy? He didn’t
even come today. I wonder why he didn’t,” expressed Garoth, putting his right
hand to his chin. “What if he did? What if he came in a tactical suit and gas
mask?” asked Simmons, causing Garoth to fall silent again and lower his hand.
“What if he was legitimately sick?” asked Garoth, sounding nervous. “On the
same day our laboratory gets infiltrated?” asked Simmons, making Garoth shrug.
“Coincidences happen,” said Garoth, with an awkward chuckle. “Beautiful!”
said McGregor, pouring himself a cup. “Y’all want some?” asked McGregor, with a
cheerful tone. “I wouldn’t mind a shot of Jack. I also wouldn’t mind getting
out of here,” replied Garoth, looking at the door, with a look of despair on
his face. McGregor stirred in some sugar and creamer. “What do they want us
for?” asked Garoth, still gazing at the door. “If they’re interested in the
product, they wouldn’t want to destroy the brains that created it. Why settle
for one profitable thing when they could potentially have more?” said Simmons,
his stare unbreakable. “So we’re just gonna be their work slaves?” asked
Garoth, timidly, turning away from the door and looking at his feet. “It’s not
impossible,” asserted Simmons. McGregor sat down at the table with a steaming
white mug in his right hand, his left arm flat on the table. “I won’t settle
for that. God, I f*****g love coconut,” expressed McGregor, sipping away. Garoth sighed heavily.
“You know, even if the product gets taken, I’ll be happy knowing we finished
it. That destination was met. That has to be of some value,” said Garoth,
trying to lighten the mood. “The product should be for us and our trusted
associates," stated McGregor, holding the cup with both hands to embrace
its warmth. "How did they even get in here?" asked Garoth, shaking
his head and glaring at the table. “A mole. They could have easily gotten
access that way,” said Simmons, still not blinking. McGregor let out a deep
sigh. “There were only four of us working here! Simmons and I have worked on
the product for six months. You, Garoth, have worked on it for three months.
Jameson has only worked on it for a week. I admit Jameson is a decent suspect,
but we background checked the s**t out of him. Maybe our best wasn’t good
enough. Man, all I wanted to do today was sit down and have a long discussion
on what we want to do with the product and this bullshit happened,” said
McGregor, enjoying his elixir. “Who are these guys anyway?” inquired Garoth,
like a seemingly endless source of questions. “You should ask them, Garoth,”
suggested McGregor, raising his mug. “We’ve seen several of these people
carrying weapons and yet we haven’t heard a single shot fired. That’s
peculiar,” said Garoth, holding his chin again. “They don’t have any
incompliant hostages yet,” assessed McGregor, giggling. “What do you mean
‘yet’?” asked Garoth, seeming apprehensive. “Gentleman, if they come into the
room and ask for any s**t from us, I won’t give those cocksuckers what they
want. You guys are welcome to but I don’t feel like losing my dignity just to
keep myself breathing. So, in case I die here tonight, I just want to say it
has been an honor to work with you,” McGregor said, sipping away. “Get out of here
with that, man,” said Garoth, making a shoving motion with his right hand. “So
I should spend my life working for those fuckers as they profiteer off of what
I dreamed of creating?” asked McGregor, with an open palm. Garoth scoffed. “You
have courage, man. Maybe you’ll inspire me to be like you,” said Garoth,
smiling. Suddenly, the door opened, and a man with a tactical suit and a gas
mask looked in from the hallway outside of the room, pointing an AR-15 at the
trio at the table. “I’m gonna have to ask you men to come with me,” he said.
“Why?" asked McGregor, sipping at his mug in the face of danger. “Comply
or be terminated,” the man said, pointing his gun specifically at McGregor.
“You’re full of s**t,” McGregor, giving the gunman a nice condescending smile.
Suddenly, an array of gunfire came from the right of the hall, spraying the
masked man in the neck and releasing his blood all over the room. Garoth jumped
out of his seat and backed away from the door with a mortified face, whereas
Simmons and McGregor remained in their chairs like nothing happened, McGregor
continuing to sip. The gunman fell against the open door, letting out a
gruesome gurgling sound and sliding to the floor. Gunfire continued to fly down
the hall in which the masked man was standing, and cries of disarray could be
heard under the shooting. The gunfire subsided, and there was a moment of
silence. Footsteps became audible, and a twenty-nine year old black male in a
white lab coat, spiked red hair, and glasses holding an M16 appeared in the
doorway. “Jameson! Where have you been?” asked Garoth, smiling and holding out
his arms like he wanted to hug their savior. “Car wouldn’t start,” said
Jameson, smirking. “Never thought I’d be happy to see you!” said Garoth,
slapping his thighs and shaking his head. Suddenly, Garoth pulled out a Beretta
92 and shot Jameson directly in the forehead, and Jameson fell to the floor,
dropping his M16, and McGregor sat motionlessly with an open mouth and his mug
positioned an inch from his mouth. Garoth aimed the Beretta
at McGregor. “I wasn’t aware Jameson was such a marksman. Four guards shot down
by one scientist. Impressive. Oh, yeah. I was told that if anything happened to
the guards outside I would have to intervene,” said Garoth, shrugging his
shoulders with a dark gaze aimed at McGregor. Finally, Simmons altered his
gaze, turning his eyes up toward Garoth but not moving his head, keeping the
same expression he had the entire time. McGregor on the other hand looked
perturbed, with his coffee mug still raised. Garoth chuckled. “How long have I
known you guys? And you never suspected a thing. We’ve been through a lot and I
had fun along the way but I don’t have a conscience for treachery. You guys are
talented and my organization has need of your skills. We’ll supply you with
everything you need and you can turn our dreams into realities. McGregor,
you’ll be a bit of a challenge, but I’m determined to bend your will. Thanks
for the powdered glass idea. I’m excited for trying that out,” said Garoth,
grinning. McGregor finally took a sip from the mug and held it in his hand.
“I’m just gonna pretend that we didn’t throw you a goddamn birthday party,”
said McGregor, not displaying any fear. Suddenly, a vibrating noise filled the
room, and Garoth reached into his right coat pocket with his left hand and
pulled out a phone. “Garoth. What? Excuse me?! What do you mean the code
doesn’t work?! I was there when the code was made! Son of a b***h! I’ll call
you back,” barked Garoth, hanging up and putting the phone back in his right
coat pocket. “Who changed the code?!”
asked Garoth, his eyes overflowing with fire. He pointed the gun at Simmons.
“Start talking,” demanded Garoth, with audible inhaling and exhaling through
his nostrils. Simmons did not comply. Garoth took the table with his left hand and
flipped it towards the door in a mindless age of rage, trying to be fearsome.
“I’ll put a bullet in your knee cap, you creepy f**k,” barked Garoth, spit
flying from his mouth. “Man, am I glad I had my mug in my hand,” said McGregor,
sighing with relief. Simmons did not look away from Garoth’s eyes. Simmons
spoke. “I developed a special mechanism that changes the code for the vault to
an emergency alternate code in case any unwelcome party sought to open it. That
mechanism is activated.” “What’s the other code?” asked Garoth, sounding calmer
now. “Let me see if I can remember,” said Simmons, folding his hands. Using his
right thumb, Simmons pressed a button on the side of a ring on his right
pointer finger, and a bullet shot out of the ring into the face of Garoth with
an explosive gunfire sound, and Garoth fell to the floor with eyes wide open.
McGregor looked over at Simmons, sighing with amazement. Simmons finally got
out of his chair, went over to the masked henchman, and picked up the AR-15.
McGregor took the last sip, sat the mug on the floor, got out of his chair,
went over to Jameson, and picked up the M16. “You were really cool,” judged
McGregor, regretting Jameson’s death. McGregor went over to Garoth, situated
the M16 into his right hand, picked up the Beretta with his left hand, and put
it in his right coat pocket. “One minute I’m laughing at the jokes you make
about a shitfaced couple next to us at a bar and another minute you’re dead on
the floor. Crazy a*s s**t,” said McGregor, shaking his head. “So how did you
activate that mechanism?” asked McGregor. Simmons situated the AR-15 into his
right hand and reached into his left coat pocket with his left hand. He made
eye contact, pulled out a black remote, showing it to McGregor, and put it back
in his pocket. “Let’s take care of the other henchman,” said Simmons. McGregor
smiled menacingly. Simmons went into the
hall, peering left and right. He nudged his head toward the hall, motioning for
McGregor to join him, and McGregor did. “We need to make sure any infiltrators
do not leave the premises. Once that objective is met, we can relocate with the
product. This facility needs to be desolate by the time anyone else from this
unknown organization pays a visit. Let’s head to the basement and take care of
anyone trying to open the vault,” said Simmons. “I feel like I’m at war right
now. It feels great,” McGregor said, smiling cheerfully. Suddenly, they heard
the elevator at the end of the hall start to move, causing them both to direct
their attention towards the elevator doors. Simmons crouched on his left knee,
aiming at the elevator, and McGregor did the same. The elevator made a “ding”,
the doors opened, two masked henchmen came into view, and Simmons and McGregor
unloaded fire. The blasting sound of bullets permeated the hall, and the bodies
of the armed men backed up against the back of the elevator asked they grunted
in pain, sliding downward and leaving trails of blood. They were still and
silent. “Come on,” said Simmons, rising to a full stance and walking over to
the men, still aiming his weapon at them, and McGregor followed. They made
their way into the elevator, standing over the motionless corpses of their
enemies, and Simmons hit the button for the basement. The doors closed and they
began their descent. “Stay alert,” said Simmons, aiming his gun at the doors,
preparing to fire at any standing life form he saw. “Stay sexy,” replied
McGregor.
The doors to the elevator opened, and nobody was in sight. The two scientists
entered the basement. They had one hall to their right, one hall to their left,
and one hall straight ahead. The room to the vault was straight ahead. “So do
we just open the door and see if we can nail every single guy inside?” asked
McGregor. “We don’t have to,” said Simmons, sounding as cold as his facial
expression. Simmons strode down the hall with his weapon aimed ahead. McGregor
wasn’t sure what Simmons intended to do, so he just followed him. They came to
the door to the room with the vault, which was all the way closed. There was a
control panel on the right side of the door that would open the door with the
right code. However, the code to open the door wasn’t the only code that was
programmed into the panel. Simmons typed in a code into the panel, hit “Enter”,
and suddenly, a burst of gunfire came from the room, and screams of panic and
agony could be heard amidst the sound of bullets. The screaming lasted about
five seconds, and the shooting lasted about ten. Simmons put in a code to open
the door and hit “Enter”. The door opened and seven bloody corpses were
covering the floor resembling the previous ones. “Well, that happened. I had no
idea you had machine guns built into the vault room. You’re pretty shady, but
you have never given me any grief, and I’m thankful to be standing here beside
you observing this bloody massacre of fuckheads who thought they could get
their hands on our s**t,” said McGregor. Simmons said nothing. McGregor rolled
his eyes. The vault could be
seen directly across from where the doorway was, and it was still closed, and
after McGregor and Simmons got a glimpse of the vault, someone could be heard
walking behind them. McGregor and Simmons turned around and saw a masked man standing
six feet away from them. The henchman fired first, putting two bullets into
McGregor’s chest, causing him to stagger, grunt, and bleed. Simmons fired
second, aiming for his throat and instantly stopping the henchman’s fire with
the first bullet, and Simmons continued to fire until the masked figure was on
his back. McGregor lost the grip on his weapon, dropping it to the floor, and
he dropped himself on his back. “F**k… Me…” whispered McGregor, trembling and
staring at his bloody chest. Simmons fell to one knee, examining his wounds.
McGregor was enveloped in excruciating pain, and he felt as though the end was
near, but right when he started to reminisce on his best memories, he had an
epiphany. “The product… Get… The product…” demanded McGregor. Simmons made eye
contact with his fallen companion, nodded, and raised himself to his feet. He
rushed into the room, ran over to the vault, typed in the correct code to the
panel on the vault, hit “Enter”, and the vault opened up slowly. He beheld the
grandeur of what lay inside, and he reached for the exquisite creation.
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