Dependence

Practice poem that ended up pretty good.

My safeguard and subject

Surrounded and stranded

Hearth and hermit

My Helen and haven

Sovereign and servant

My student and sage

Helpful and humble

My heartache, my heart

Reviews

[CS]

Hello, Brad. I like that you have created a dualistic poem here. Dependence is always a co-operative effort. The need is there during the safety and the betrayal. Both aspects being equally significant. The thought behind this little piece of art is a truth. A very honest piece of writing here. I very much enjoyed.

[Bradley]

Thank you for the response. Your feedback is invaluable.