Longing

What are you thinking?

Look into the distance

And there flashes into one's mind

A fleeting memory

A sudden rush of melancholia...

One cannot name 

How the world seemed to glow;

When the heart quietly prays

Of that long-lost song...

Lips purse

As the songs pass by;

The heart cannot hold on

For so long, so short...

Upwards, to the sky

Infinite and blue;

One's eyes seek

What one has always been asking...

-TheMalady

Author's Note

Hullo! Want to share some thoughts? Any feedback's are always welcome! :)

Reviews

[BThomvanWart]

This is a good poem. I enjoy the lightness in its tone, yet it portrays feelings that go beyond the soft edges of the piece. Although, I feel as though something's missing from this. I can't exactly think of what it is, but it seems to be lacking in translation. But, as it is, it's a marvelous piece. Good work.

[TheMalady]

Hi! Thanks a lot for the time in reviewing this piece. I'm glad you find this good. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Gentle and good words and thoughts.
"One cannot name
How the world seemed to glow;
When the heart quietly prays
Of that long-lost song..."
The above lines stood out for me. Prayer and song. Not a place place to know. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[TheMalady]

Thanks a lot, Coyote Poetry. I truly appreciate the time you've given to read my work. Thanks a lot! :) Truly appreciate it!

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Krizito]

I don't think I've read any of your poems-apologies if it is any fault of mine- but this I piece of art, I feel was worth the wait. I've longed for something, know how it feels, and with the proverbial ink and paper...you've brought that feeling, all adorned in soft, beauty words to our reality..Great Job.

[TheMalady]

Thanks a lot, Krizito! I am very happy that you liked this one I truly appreciate your review and praises. :)

[maria ( rose)]

I was immensely moved with this poem. I think so many people can relate to this .
It flows with such depth leaving ones heart to fluctuate.
maria

[TheMalady]

Thanks a lot, Maria (rose)! I am very glad that you can relate to this one. All of us long on to something. Thanks again for the review! :)

[Riddhi]

nice poem...I really liked it...Keep iy up and thanks for sharing...

[TheMalady]

Thanks a lot for reading. I am really thankful of your review! :)

[Aswin R Prasad]

Loved this poem.. Brilliantly written..
Thank you for sharing such a lovely write :)

Keep writing :)

[TheMalady]

Thanks a lot for reading. I really appreciate your review. :)

[amberelisabethbagley]

Lovely piece, that really speaks to the reader. I loved this well done

[TheMalady]

Thanks a lot for the review. I really appreciate your time in reading this. Thank you so much. :)

[Leran Vakem]

A beautiful poem, well written and it reads great.
Thank you for sharing

L.V.

[TheMalady]

Thanks a lot for reading! I really appreciate it. :) You are very welcome. ;)

[Zyle Christian William ..]

I love the imagery! This is nice! I don't have any critiques!

[TheMalady]

Thanks a lot Z.C.W! I really appreciate the time you've given to review my poem. Thanks a lot! :)

[Zyle Christian William Cook]

Of course ! No problem!

[Lalochezia]

I admit that I am helpless with poems but even I feel the helplessness at watching everything run through our fingers. Great imagery as always!

[TheMalady]

Hi Lalochezia! Thanks a lot for reviewing! I just had the notion of writing a poem about longing. I'm truly happy you liked it. :)

[B. Boileau]

I really like this one just as it is. It gives thought to meditation. And has somewhat of the same calming effects
Thank you
bill

[TheMalady]

Thank you a lot for taking your time in reading this poem. Your review is a motivation for me. Thanks a lot! :)