Silence

Dabble about silence. Though, this one's a minimalist.

Silence.

There was really nothing left for them to speak. 

Two friends. 

Thrown into pits of lies. 

Rage. 

Betrayal. 

Hatred.

Now, all had been left hanging in the hands of Time. Forgotten all the golden moments shared with each other, the blissful laughter's that ripped the thick silence, and brushed away the gray days of their childhood years.

All for naught. 

Now, years had flown by like bluebirds diving in the waves of the blue skies. Fate drawn them in the crossroad of Life - a chance meeting to seek their heart's redemption. 

The air thickened. Clear blue eyes, as vacant as ever swept across those crimson ones. 

They stopped. Time seemed to stopped as well. 

'It has been a while.'

'I see, you're still the same.'

Only silence. Though their eyes uttered those silent words between each other. 

Only the two of them. Nobody else would ever understand them.

But Time is gold. And is constant. 

Then, Fate parted away. Drifted along the streams of Life - and the two were soon shifted away with only silence as their - 

ciao. 

Author's Note

A minimalistic kind of dabble. I want to see if this comprehensible or not good enough.

Reviews

[A hare off]

This poem is not only beautiful and sad but so relatable to me. To meet again after all of the years only to walk away in silence. So deep and filled with wonderful imagery

[TheMalady]

Thanks a lot for reading my work. I was sad when I wrote this one. I'm quite happy that you can relate to this one. Thanks a lot for reading! :)

[jesserose99]

oh, I want to say I understand it, the eyes, leave me wanting more, but somewhat comprehensible. Makes me think of maybe a vampire and a werewolf. that is why time could be a constant. they could be quite old. They are different but not meant to be, no one understands them? her eyes a cool blue, his crimson. I guess it is still a mystery to me.

I really enjoyed the writing, the mystery element is great...granted, it will be nice to know if I understood it correctly or if I am just fruit loops today.

[TheMalady]

Thanks a lot for reading this! That is actually what I meant. :) The characters were ambiguous it could either be anyone because I wanted it to be somebody. Though I was inspired of a friendship that turned into rivalry. Thank you for the feedback! I really appreciate it! :)