Pandemonium

Pandemonium

A Poem by Lydia

Pandemonium, Delirium

A fear in them

That cannot be expelled

Confusions, Illusions

All of the conclusions

Have all certainly failed

Agitation, Deception

All have no corrections

Civilization has derailed

Turbulence, Fraudulence

What a coincidence

They all have been jailed

Instability, Duplicity

They lack all lucidity

Their mental state has been unveiled

Anxiety, Insanity

A lot of it is pure vanity

They thought they had prevailed

Distress, Unreasonableness

We all are defenseless

All things fair have been curtailed.

© 2012 Lydia


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This has a rhythm that is much like a riddle or V for Vendetta. Neat.

Posted 12 Years Ago


The rhyming scheme is incredibly unique. An overall amazing poem. Everything you write is lovely! Well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I actually have never read Delirium, but I've heard a lot about it. This poem isn't inspired by anything really, but I really would like to read that book. I actually just realized that I used the words Delirium, and Pandemonium. I believe the second book is called Pandemonium. Haha

Posted 12 Years Ago


is this inspired by the book Delirium? If it is OMG i LOVE THAT BOOK!
I also love this poem, great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


it's not just the clever way you put this together that makes this so provocative, it is the fact that you have punched the world in the kisser with absolute and definitive clarity, exposing the downfall and deceleration of modern society,
this is poignant and brilliant!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Classy rhyme scheme, I like it. The way it rolls off my tongue while I read it is really cool. Good job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


the rhyming is wonderful… makes it easy to read, and it has great flow. I love the imagery, and the line, "We all are defenseless." How true. Great work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love the rhyme, and how it's so thought provoking and true.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice and beautifully written with a touch of excellence.Good job

Posted 12 Years Ago


Yes, this is a very enjoyable poem to be sure. There is a constants flow which is hard to accomplish sometimes. I sometimes feel this way, thanks for the read.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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