What Do You Think?

What Do You Think?

A Poem by Lydia
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So, I used to write songs all the time. I might upload a few. Anyways, this chorus just popped into my head and I wanted to see what you guys think.

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 And I try to tell you my feelings

But I always end up bleeding

Always end up leaving before

Before you can open your door

 

And I always end up running down the pavement

Running away from

Everything I should be saying

I don't want to be playing around

Wondering, wondering how

© 2012 Lydia


Author's Note

Lydia
So, should I write more or do you guys think song writing isn't really my thing?

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I think once you get into the rhythme (SP) of the song in your head, you'll be able to do it. I believe in you great start!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I liked it, you should deffo write more :O) Id love to hear it as a song :O)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Definitely write more. Go for it girl!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I think you should write more... I would love to read the full song!
100/100

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is really good so far!! You definitely finish it!! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Omg. This is good. [: I love it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


i think this was great

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like it. You should continue to write songs.

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is a beautiful schorus ( i belted it out since no one can hear me right now:P) and I do think you should write more!!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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