The politician is a wily animal. Be careful TheLostMind :)
Impeccable drafting. Gifted rhyming. I loved it.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Indeed, the Politician can be a very deceptive person. A true politician can make the majority belie.. read moreIndeed, the Politician can be a very deceptive person. A true politician can make the majority believe that they are being downtrodden and disrespected by the minority :). Thanks for stopping by
I love it love it love it! Just few hours ago a new controversy has sprung up among the Kerala politicians regarding sexual abuse. And this is not even the first in the last few months. The amount a sexual abuse and corruption makes us sick. They are supposed to stand up for us and work for us, and they do nothing, and on top of that they take advantage of women and the poor. So sad, but it is happening even as I type this, and it would continue to happen
The rhymes are in perfect accordance. Your words are simple and sharp. Beautiful creation and it speaks for a cause.
Yes, I am :)... Howdy neighbor :P.. And yes, this poem was written as a response to certain actions .. read moreYes, I am :)... Howdy neighbor :P.. And yes, this poem was written as a response to certain actions and statements by certain politicians. I wanted to add a line or two, you know asking where the money I pay as taxes was going.. They didn't rhyme well so I had to leave them out :P.
Thanks for stopping by Annie. I am glad you liked this one :)
9 Years Ago
It doesn't matter, even without those lines this poem is very much complete and meaningful :)
I'm not big into politics so this didn't hold my attention as much as your other poems have. It's weird that I'm not into politics, though, because I love shows such as West Wing, and House of Cards. My point being, this poem reminded me very much of the show House of Cards and made me want to hop on Netflix to watch a few episodes, haha. Still a wonderful piece, even if I didn't enjoy it as much as others :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank You. I appreciate your honesty. I like honest people. Ya, House Of Cards is indeed good :)
Well I lost my mind on this and considering I was raised in the Nation's Capitol I am good at politics but I am not sure that this politician hasn't ran this campaign somewhere before? Good job
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
You just can't lose your mind Rico. I could accuse you of plagiarism. You can't copy my name :P. Th.. read moreYou just can't lose your mind Rico. I could accuse you of plagiarism. You can't copy my name :P. There is always some politician in every country who does this kind of s**t :). Thanks for stopping by. I really appreciate it :)
9 Years Ago
lol...I was seeing if you were paying attention plus there was implied consent that happened subcons.. read morelol...I was seeing if you were paying attention plus there was implied consent that happened subconsciously so therefore since it resided there between the id, the superego and ego the fallacy in the accusation of plagiarism is not valid, has no basis therefore is being dismissed....see i told you I was from the land of politicians and slanted truths....be blessed :.)
Wow. theres so much power in this work of yours. I could see a string of faces that came to my mind as I read each verse and images of social indignation and implicit atrocities committed.
Really thought provoking.
Great job!
(PS: I could, as the earlier reviewer assessed, tell you are definitely Indian. ;) )
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you Roshan. I wrote this one ages ago. Glad you liked it :)
How very true. Across nations even. Politicians are all the same everywhere. They make promises before being elected or appointed and then once they're first in the ladder of politics, who cares about their promises...when they can bathe in money and women (or men haha) and power. At the same time though, I feel that they're also manipulated by their so called "guiding voices," that they do not have full control over anything...they're just a political face to look at, but everything else is done for them. They're puppets on strings. And their master is the Devil.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
"Or men!" .. Ya lol.. :) "They're puppets on strings. And their master is the Devil. " - Couldn't ag.. read more"Or men!" .. Ya lol.. :) "They're puppets on strings. And their master is the Devil. " - Couldn't agree more. Thanks for reviewing Nadia. I really appreciate it :)
Perfectly described. "Coated in slime though looking bright and shiny none the less". And remember you heard it from droc first. Over here in Aussie land anyone can make high power. It's not as money motivated as it's monkey. We have had the 'drovers dog' as Prime Minister six times in a row.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
I will remember that. Thanks for stopping by droc :)
I agree. The average wealth of a congressman and senator is 40 million. Rich men won't increase their taxes and the poor will carry the burden. Take a lot of money to run for office. Impossible for a average Joe to run for any kind of office. Your words direct and honest. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thanks for stopping by. I agree. Those rich, power craving politicians must stop playing with the l.. read moreThanks for stopping by. I agree. Those rich, power craving politicians must stop playing with the lives of the poor. They should give something back to the society.
In USA. Rich folks pay small part of taxes. Won't change. Can't elect a poor man with concern to off.. read moreIn USA. Rich folks pay small part of taxes. Won't change. Can't elect a poor man with concern to office. And you are welcome. Last year. Obama cancelled the pay raise for the congress and the senate. Some radio show did a pretend event to raise money for the leaders. I learn my Senator Levin was worth 80 million dollars. A career politician.
9 Years Ago
Lol. Power and money go hand in hand. That's a fact.
I love reading poems. I will be reviewing your poems / stories as and when I get some time. I like honest reviews, so expect my reviews to be honest. If I have reviewed your poem, I have done it becau.. more..