Alone.

She stands there alone in a crowded room, she's not like the other girls. She only observes the world around her. The girls make fun of her, the boys don't even know that she exists. She's smart and funny but again no one knows she's there. Maybe she's dead or maybe she's just shy. I don't know because I am not this girl. She tries to speak but no one listens. She cries as the room empties as  all of the people leave. I stand at the other end of the rom. She looks at me as if I was going to hurt her. I slowly move closer  to her, as she pins herself against the wall too scared to move. I hold out my hand and beckon her to come closer. She looks at my hand and slowly extends hers. I take her ever so delicate trembling hand and bring her to the middle of the room. She looks around this empty space, taking in this different view. Still I say nothing and just let her explore the possibility of stepping away from all that she has known in her past She then suddenly stops looking around this empty room and her eyes fall back onto me. She opens her mouth to speak and the words just spill out " You know I exist?" I hesitate but respond "Yes, of course I know you exist"   She smiles as it seems for the first time in years and she begins to hug me, the one weird thing is that as she does this.. I start to notice that she isn't at al human.. but a ghost a wallflower whom only wanted to be noticed by some on. I don't know how  or why this girl died.. All I can say is that I am glad that I had this chance to make someone's life  even if that person is already dead.

Author's Note

I know I have some run on sentences.. but this was a short story I came up with a year ago.

Reviews

[SAYED THANGAL]

the very first line gives the theme of the story, ''she stands alone in a crowded room'' , well done.
sayed thangal

[Sarrah.246]

I really like it:D make more like these. I can relate

[TheLostGirl]

Aww thank you (: I will do my best to get some more of my work up. Its just been difficult!