Very clever simile here. It's true, once a person enjoys the game of chess, there are never enough hours in the day to play the game. Yes, patience and planning are a big part of winning in the game......chess AND the romantic game! :) I enjoyed this. Lydi**
I can see why you are a fan...
Beauty and brains.
Some hearts are won with flashy cars and wealth...
Some skirts are blown away by low body fat and narcissistic posing.
Some by convenience and comfort.
Yet the heart bound by confidence and intelligence... Ah, now this heart is worth education and effort to prove worthy of... Chess is not a game for everyone... So it is with the complications of love.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
LOL .. I'm fascinated with women playing chess. Understanding the game and strategy is as complicate.. read moreLOL .. I'm fascinated with women playing chess. Understanding the game and strategy is as complicated as understanding the woman's ways and thinking . Glad you can relate David
i like the metaphor for winning a woman's heart. i agree...that is exactly how to win a woman. that can be a credo from the bad boy all the way to a gentleman. all must play this game. excellent poem.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Mockingbird that was very sweet of you . Thanks for the read .
I like this piece, I once did 4 poems about Chess, it's my favorite game... and play it frequently. For me, there lays truth in your words, from your point of view. :) I think life in general is a chess-game, nowdays, we must be prepared to a lot of strategical thinking, there is always a next move to a next level...
And ofcourse I loved this piece, it will go into my library.
- Elisa
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thanks Elisa for dropping with athoughtful words .
I think you overlooked this line, Neil: "Chess is like an elusive women." ---women should be WOMAN, unless you get the article "an".
She's beautiful. Being the World Chess Champion, an intelligent person plus a perfect beauty...who wouldn't adore such woman? Even I would have admired her especially if I met her in person.
Nice quotes in here...or some vents? Well-done, Neil.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Glad to be corrected Dhaye. I'm trying to empty any trace left about chess . So it will be a clean s.. read moreGlad to be corrected Dhaye. I'm trying to empty any trace left about chess . So it will be a clean slate. Thank you Dhaye...
10 Years Ago
Why, Neil? Is it easy for you to forget your first love? If you lost in a game, is it really fair t.. read moreWhy, Neil? Is it easy for you to forget your first love? If you lost in a game, is it really fair that you will give it up?
JESUS AND THE SPARROWS
Consider The Sparrow
Here Jesus was walking alone along the Mediterranean Sea near Tiberius in the northern part of Israel and He offers seeds to some sparrows searchi.. more..