CHESS CRUMBS

CHESS CRUMBS

A Poem by NeiL ArandA
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Some thoughts that still lingers inside my mind

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Chess Crumbs

 

Chess is like an elusive woman.

Who turn you away, countless times.

You find yourself keep coming back,

For a chance of another dance.

 

 ~


Chess is not for the fainthearted

By bravery it is not won

It is not conquered by brute strength

But by patience, planning and

Arduous preparation alone.

 

~  by NeiL ArandA  ~

© 2014 NeiL ArandA


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Very clever simile here. It's true, once a person enjoys the game of chess, there are never enough hours in the day to play the game. Yes, patience and planning are a big part of winning in the game......chess AND the romantic game! :) I enjoyed this. Lydi**

Posted 10 Years Ago


NeiL ArandA

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Ms Lydia .
I can see why you are a fan...
Beauty and brains.
Some hearts are won with flashy cars and wealth...
Some skirts are blown away by low body fat and narcissistic posing.
Some by convenience and comfort.

Yet the heart bound by confidence and intelligence... Ah, now this heart is worth education and effort to prove worthy of... Chess is not a game for everyone... So it is with the complications of love.

Posted 10 Years Ago


NeiL ArandA

10 Years Ago

LOL .. I'm fascinated with women playing chess. Understanding the game and strategy is as complicate.. read more
i like the metaphor for winning a woman's heart. i agree...that is exactly how to win a woman. that can be a credo from the bad boy all the way to a gentleman. all must play this game. excellent poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


NeiL ArandA

10 Years Ago

Mockingbird that was very sweet of you . Thanks for the read .
I like this piece, I once did 4 poems about Chess, it's my favorite game... and play it frequently. For me, there lays truth in your words, from your point of view. :) I think life in general is a chess-game, nowdays, we must be prepared to a lot of strategical thinking, there is always a next move to a next level...

And ofcourse I loved this piece, it will go into my library.

- Elisa

Posted 10 Years Ago


NeiL ArandA

10 Years Ago

Thanks Elisa for dropping with athoughtful words .

10 Years Ago

Very welcome my friend :)
A great analogy from a brilliant mind. Thank you for sharing this gift...:)..............

Posted 10 Years Ago


NeiL ArandA

10 Years Ago

Hi Sami ..thanks for reading my piece . You encourage me so much .
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

My pleasure...Any time...God bless...:)..............
It never occurred to me that playing chess is like pursuing/wooing a woman. perhaps, patience and strategy would do some magic.

Posted 10 Years Ago


NeiL ArandA

10 Years Ago

LOL ... Thank gabrielle ...I have fully mastered the best strategy to a womens heart
I think you overlooked this line, Neil: "Chess is like an elusive women." ---women should be WOMAN, unless you get the article "an".

She's beautiful. Being the World Chess Champion, an intelligent person plus a perfect beauty...who wouldn't adore such woman? Even I would have admired her especially if I met her in person.

Nice quotes in here...or some vents? Well-done, Neil.




Posted 10 Years Ago


NeiL ArandA

10 Years Ago

Glad to be corrected Dhaye. I'm trying to empty any trace left about chess . So it will be a clean s.. read more
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Why, Neil? Is it easy for you to forget your first love? If you lost in a game, is it really fair t.. read more
Grandmaster and former Women's World Chess Champion Alexandra Kosteniuk

Posted 10 Years Ago



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