AMMWM

This is a poetic rap-like thing i made about someone.

It's been a long, long time since i last wrote

but now im in a boat, along the ocean with

a s**t ton of motion in it, along with it im

choking on, love gone wrong, and emotion, I miss her

Can't kiss her no more, we split, feels like s**t

without her. She's happy im sad, she moved on and i'm

mad. but that's why I rhyme, to distract, waste time

i'm outta wack, not myself anymore. I got a global

world war

going on in my heart, my head, and my body i'm sorry

baby, i am, please come back i miss you. someone 

get me a tissue. i know there's no excuse for

crying when im rhyming, thinking of signing off

for good. but i dont know if i could, but down the

pen and walk away, but see her and stay, Hurt, she

made me feel like dirt. So here I am, a big hole

where my heart should be, it will be my de,mise it's

not much of a surprise. But i hurt, still, don't

know how much more before i collapse in this

pool of my own blood, i'm leaving, never thought i'd

ever be believing im alone, yet another time, last time

i wanna rhyme about this, miss. i'm done.

 im sick of being the one who gets hurt

and broken hearts, the time starts now,

im here if ya need me, have fun with

him, im hurt.  im tough like the dirt i 

came from, will return to, but when it comes to

me, who, knows how long i'll be numb-

oh wait, i know.

Lighters in the sky,

when they all turn on,

i'll be with you again. the end.

Reviews

[Marie]

Great rap sound...