My Heart is Not Open

I placed a seal on the sore. I'm sure that I won't have you anymore.

I put a seal on the gap of my heart.

It is more worthless than a broken cart!

I just want to stay,

I should keep my eyes open during the day!

I can’t just say:

I’d like to play!

So you learn,

When I see my heart burn

My love will turn.

My heart is not open!

I’ve placed a seal and now I’m choking!

I can’t think of any reason

FOR THIS TO BE SO PLEASING!

I throw on my shirt and then a coat.

I break a mirror and grip your throat.

I can’t help but enjoy it when you choke

And I have not wasted my time tying your rope!

My pain seems to be a justified reason!

NOTHING HAS EVER BEEN THIS PLEASING!

So you learn,

When I see my heart burn

My love will turn.

My heart is not open!

I’ve placed a seal and now I’m choking!

I can’t think of any reason

FOR THIS TO BE SO PLEASING!

So we can learn,

The strong live and the weak burn.

So we can follow fighters,

Some die out and some burn brighter

Author's Note

This was written when I was about thirteen... It's not as mature and pleasing, but still has the raw potency of my modern material.

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

Kind of raw to open ones hear like this. Its out there where the stars do shine reminding me of word play and rhyme, This goes much farther than word play I think its excellent writings Best wishes on your next write.

[TheLastEclipse]

Thank you very much, sir. I am glad you enjoyed it and found it so powerful. Though it may not be the best, I write with passion. That's all I ask that people see.