No Defense

No Defense, But I'm Trying To Find The Right Path

 

It is a crushing blow.

What the wrong? Is it what I have done?

You say that I should know,

Well, babe, how can I when you just keep playing games?

And this is the part where I suck it up and take the blame.

                I've been hurt,

                Way too many times and I'm starting to get fed up,

                With your words.

                They keep growing and growing in volume and it is making me sick.

 

Well darling,

I tried to get used to your new mood.

You're angry,

Uptight and always so intense.

How can I even attach my lips to give a true kiss?

When all you’re doing is faking every single bit of this!

                I feel hurt,

                I'm breaking down too easily,

                My own damn,

                It continues growing and growing upon me.

                God bless me.

                Oh girl you're so unique.

 

But I fear I may have to cut the cord,

This is not working anymore,

I'm saying that it's not you or me.

It's just a combination of everything.

It's so sickening, the sight!

Of every God unbeloved fight.

 

I wear my damn like a cape,

It's my refuge and escape,

But it's on fire!

I need to lift my arms, HIGHER!

'Can you hear me?' all the people say

Sprout your wings and fly!

God with allowance, let us all by!

Hold his hand and do right!

No matter how hard it is....

 

      ....Babydoll, you will win the fight...

Reviews

[Serenity Faith]

So sad, it's so sad how people change. We as humans are walking contradictions. We are creatures of habit, yet still we change. Then we don't handle it well, and it seems we try to escape from a trap, that isn't really there. Heh, what am I saying? Probably doesn't make much sense. But this is how I intepret this. It's a thought provoking piece and well structured.

[TheLastEclipse]

You are very talented at catching my meanings. I am impressed. Sometimes I don't even catch what I meant until reflecting on a poem but this one you were spot on :)

[Serenity Faith]

Teehee, maybe it takes a crazy to understand a crazy...I don't believe crazy is a bad thing either, makes us helluv a lot more interesting ^_~ you're good at putting your thoughts and emotions into words, in a realistic sense. Not just the simple dressed up words me and most others use.

[TheLastEclipse]

Who's to say I don't like dressed up BIG words :P

[Serenity Faith]

Hahaha! True :p