Briar

Dented in,
like the car door I rammed my head into.
Messed up,
like my speech after a run-in with you.
Crushed,
like the way my heart feels after a talk with you.

This relationship has its phases.
I feel like I'm in too many places at once.
I am drowning under the ocean,
while freezing in the tundra,
in the dry wastleland of a desert.
Death is near.
Can't you hear? CAN'T YOU HEAR!

Broken,
like the shard of glass against my wrist.
Bleeding,
like the lips that you kissed,
All alone,
like the essence you left with me.
Crushed now,
now I hope you can see.

What I'd do if I was you.
I'd crush everyone beneath my shoe.
Filling up with all the power,
Never to know it would end Within the hour.
I am drowning under the ocean,
Burning in Hell,
Losing breath to space,
while poisonous toxins enter my face!

Why do you enjoy watching the pain?

Author's Note

An oldie... Classics I say...

Reviews

[Serenity Faith]

Breathtaking...it hits in my heart place in a strange way, maybe because of what it says to me? I'm still not sure.Taking in every pain at once...it's overwhelming. Emotions are fickle things. Wonderful write. Thank you for sharing ^_^

[TheLastEclipse]

No, no, thank you for sharing your opinion. I love it and I am glad you enjoyed it as well. :)