Aground

Aground- stranded upon a shallow shore

MAYBE I'M JUST ONE

of the many,

on your list.

BUT YOU CAN'T DENY

that it would be,

so great if we kissed.

LOOK ME IN THE EYES!

And let's tell each other,

RIGHT! Stories of one another,

BLIND! Me with your crystal eyes.

Take away your veil of light..

I was there at one time.

I could never decide,

where to go or who to choose.

I am fixed,

leave it alone, 

don't go back there,

or you'll be left alone.

I once stumbled upon questions,

that to this day remain unanswered 

and I'm still trying for more,

keep your feet upon the shore: aground.

I TRY TO KEEP.

Myself up, 

upon my feet.

BUT I WILL FALL,

Like the rest,

I'll just pray to keep

LOOK ME IN THE EYES

Tell me what we fantasize,

ghosts and demons cannot lie.

We will make our sensual ties.

Blind me with your crystal eyes.

Oh, oh, oh,

Oh.

Talk.

Write it down.

I was there at one time.

I could never decide,

where to go or who to choose.

I am fixed,

leave it alone, 

don't go back there,

or you'll be left alone.

I once stumbled upon questions,

that to this day remain unanswered 

and I'm still trying for more,

keep your feet upon the shore.

KEEP YOUR FEET UPON THE SHORE!

Get up and escape.

KEEP YOUR FEET UPON THE SHORE!

Get up before it's too late.

KEEP BEGGING FOR MORE!

Kiss and kiss again.

I CAN NOT SEE ANYMORE!

Author's Note

Ignore the 'oh's. This was originally lyrics to a song I wrote and imagine the 'oh's as the climax, relief, or bridge of the song and only then will you get the full impact of the song.(Picture is all credited to Project Zelda)

Reviews

[Sacsen Foote]

I've read your most recent additions and I like what I'm seeing, I will say though you have some off putting practices. The caps took me off gaurd, I think the "!" Would suffice. Which brings me to my next point which that you tend to over use "!"s I am still a fan though. Your work is very emotional and honest which I feel are of upmost importance. Keep up the good work man.

[Ella]

A: I like the Oh's, I think it adds emotions to the song
Speaking of which, I LOVE this song, I know I say this to much, but it isn't my fault that YOU'RE such a good writer! It is amazing, I don't know what else to say :)