No Defense

No Defense

A Poem by TheLastEclipse
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Written in 2012. Just wrote this moments ago. Hope you all like it.

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No Defense, But I'm Trying To Find The Right Path
It is a crushing blow.
What the wrong is it I have done.
You say that I should know,
Well babe how can I when you just keep playing games?
And this is the part where I suck it up and take the blame.
I've been hurt,
Way too many times and I'm starting to get fed up,
With your words.
They keep growing and growing in volume and it is making me sick.
Well darling,
I tried to get used to your new mood.
You're angry,
uptight and always so intense.
How can I even attach my lips to give a true kiss?
When all you're doing is faking every single bit of this!
I feel hurt,
I'm breaking down too easily,
My own damn,
It continues growing and growing upon me.
God bless me.
Oh girl you're so unique.
But I fear I may have to cut the cord,
This is not working anymore,
I'm saying that it's not you or me.
It's just a combination of everything.
It's so sickening, the sight!
Of every God unloved fight.
I wear my damn like a cape, 
It's my refuge and escape, 
But it's on fire!
I need to lift my arms, HIGHER!
'Can you hear me,' all the people say
Sprout your wings and fly!
God with let us all by!
Hold his hand and do right!
No matter how hard it is....
.... Baby doll, you will win the fight...
How about I just tell them this,
The bliss doesn't always come from that horny kiss,
Sure ecstasy will certainly bring a smile, 
But that smile will only last for a little while.
Stay away, beauty only lasts so long,
I've got a weakness that I cannot fight against, oh dear you're so wrong.
How about I just tell them this,
The bliss doesn't always come from that horny kiss,
Sure ecstasy will certainly bring a smile, 
But that smile will only last for a little while.
Stay away, beauty only lasts so long,
I've got a weakness that I cannot fight against, oh dear you're so wrong.
You are so wrong.

© 2012 TheLastEclipse


Author's Note

TheLastEclipse
The picture is of my ex girlfriend and this of course is a portion of our story.

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"Can you here me, all the people say" Wrong here. (hear)
Anyways other than that I love it, it paints a very clear picture of your past relationship, might I point out that your ex-girlfriend seems like a witch. I like how truthful it is, it shows your emotions which is amazing. Most people write about others pain, I like how you do it about your own. Amazing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TheLastEclipse

12 Years Ago

Thank you. And this children is the downfall to being in a hurry and not spell checking your work af.. read more
Ella

12 Years Ago

Haha, I am the same way, and that's good that you fixed your life.



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Wow this really speaks to me! I totally get what your saying! Very Nice!

Posted 12 Years Ago


TheLastEclipse

12 Years Ago

Thanks you much.
good portayal of your feelings,,,,i liked the use of the horny kiss. it brought the reality of the relationship out. thanks for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TheLastEclipse

12 Years Ago

Yeah, you will see that a whole lot in my writings. I have had such a problem with lustful relations.. read more
TheLastEclipse

12 Years Ago

*their
"Can you here me, all the people say" Wrong here. (hear)
Anyways other than that I love it, it paints a very clear picture of your past relationship, might I point out that your ex-girlfriend seems like a witch. I like how truthful it is, it shows your emotions which is amazing. Most people write about others pain, I like how you do it about your own. Amazing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TheLastEclipse

12 Years Ago

Thank you. And this children is the downfall to being in a hurry and not spell checking your work af.. read more
Ella

12 Years Ago

Haha, I am the same way, and that's good that you fixed your life.
I can feel the anger and frustration, well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 2, 2012
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TheLastEclipse
TheLastEclipse

Crossville, AL



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I have been writing since the age of twelve and have been creating oral tales since before that. I am a Christian but have a twisted way in some of my stories. I write poetry, stories, and I'm a cas.. more..

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