Escape

escape

 

 

Is what I need

To be released

To be free

  

 

One day, I have to

Fly away

And you have to

Let me go...

Reviews

[Mark]

Very bare bones poem, kind of an overview of what it is like to feel trapped in a situation is what I got from it. A young person speaking to a parent, or a lover speaking to someone no longer loved maybe.

It could be any situation, which is the great thing about your write. :)

[cynthiabuhainbaello]

The poem is eloquent and strong, declaring a determination to be free. It's impact ties up well with the chosen title and the graphics that complement it is remarkably fitting.

[manish]

you are not only a poet but an artist...selection of the colour of ur font...the picture and the content of the picture and ur thoughts is weaving magic here...a big fan of yours...

[Blue Ivory]

Awww thanks for all your lovely reviews! Appreciate them :)

[Kaitlynn A. Black]

Reminds me of a chick that is ready to leave the nest and the momma and daddy birds don't want her to go. Beautiful image to go with the words! I like! :)

-Odd & Ends

[Blue Ivory]

Thank you! ^w^

[Kaitlynn A. Black]

I welcomed the experience to read it! :)

[Blue Ivory]

lol

[VelvetRosetta]

To be free is the only way...freedom is the gateway to happiness...I am still tied in ways but little by little we need to break the chains and fly...love this piece.

[Rose of Gondor]

The picture and the imagery the words create is what makes this poem take flight and flutter upon people's heartstrings. Bittersweet and beautiful, very touching. My favorite is the last lines "you have to let me go", because it hints at the parting, and how this one link is how the narrator of this poem is grounded, the one thing keeping them from flying. This time, they are prepared to let this thing go, to severe this link, to cut all ties with earth and to soar toward heaven. And that's what makes it so unearthly and beautiful. Congrats! This is a great poem!

[MIB]

I love the combination of your words with the picture, it's really breath taking... awesome work keep it up :D

[UnderCompulsion]

The picture and the words-all it goes together very well!I liked it.Sometimes I feel like that about some people or events.Sometimes I am in position when I need to let go of someone or something.What is in the past should stay in the past.Most of the time. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Can't cage a free spirit forever. It will die or one day escape. I like the flow of thoughts and the strong ending. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[MOON]

Beautiful words short and poignant.