Lost Love

If all it took was to tell you in every single language

-Existing or not-

Just how much I miss you

The time it’d take would be a small price to pay

      

But it isn’t that simple, is it?

 

It truly is horrible to know true love and to lose it

Not knowing how to get it back

I guess, this is how I’m young and dumb…

 

You were to me a god

A god I thought had come to earth

My love, forgive me

I gave my love to an imposter

 

They say I’m crazy now

The lady with no home

But what of the life that we had started?

For you were the only one that ever made me feel like I belonged.

 

Is it forgiveness that I am to seek?

Or am I just not calling you in the right way?

However am I to get you back?

Cuz face it,

Not a greater love story has ever been told

But ours was never spoken either, was it?

Only sung.

Sung in the voice of silence.

 

How long since we have spoken?

How long since I told you the tales of all the madness?

How long since you gave me

That one thing that no one else can do for me?

 

I long for your arms.

I long for you to surrender again.

I long for the day I can finally remember

What it’s like to live once I’ve fallen in slumber

For that strange world we could only be together in

Was the only time I truly felt awake

 

Tell me, will I spend eternity

Knowing every time I close my eyes,

I’ll just be closing my eyes?

Have you really taken away my angel wings?

Will I really never dream again?

 

This world was never meant for me.

But that thread we had gave me all my purpose.

Without it, am I to be a soulless body?

I’m sure that was never your intention for me…

 

I know, I was to never speak of you.

Is that what has angered you?

If that is so, I’ll sing you whatever song you like until you have no choice but to let me know I’m heard.

Reviews

[Stephen]

Once again, you make me surprised with the art of your pieces. It's really unbelievable to me that how people are still so creative out there in the world cus, now a days, it's tough to me find such kinda people who are artists..but that's again very impressive. That's really an impressive write once again! You've given a shape to love, to your feelings in a new form from where the droplets of emotions with love dripping down n make the floor immortal at all. I love your work!

Keep up the great job!

[Blue Ivory]

Thank you! Pleased to hear it :)

[Shaquana Adams]

This is a splendid read and it is expressed beautifully. Keep writing! ^-^
-QuanaWana

[DrD]

There is nothing more haunting than lost love poetry. I do a lot of it myself. This encompassed the feelings intended and was crafted into a delightful read.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

When we lose what we thought was a love that would be forever it is natural to question everything in life and our worthiness. But love of ones self is the best cure for a broken heart. Believe in yourself and those who matter will believe in you.

[Sami Khalil]

This world was never meant for me.

But that thread we had gave me all my purpose

A splendid read and write. I like the whole poem...:)...........

[FelicityAllona]

Your poem speaks of trust, mistakes and pride. that is what I thought. :))
This is a great piece. . xD

[icelandicblue]

We are the sum of all our experiences. Each event shapes us in ways we cannot imagine. Your poem speaks of mistakes but they are the taskmasters of learning. There are clearer waters ahead for you for you now know how to use the wind to sail. This is a great piece of poetry.

[Blue Ivory]

Thanks for the advice and your kind words :)

[Rene Velez]

to live and love despite loss, is to be human, never regret loving someone even if its only for a short time, in the grand scheme of things-nothing lasts forever. well done.

[Frieda P]

You're not young and dumb, it happens to all of us. Love is fickle....you'll dream again. Like this little peek into your mind Siren.