Lost

And the word I had to enter for this: superfix!

Frankly, I’m losing it.

And you’re the first person I had in mind.

I was lost, you see?

Still am.

All I have are jumbled thoughts.

But I want that to stop.

 

I want you to give it up to me.

 

What was that thing you once gave me?

That strange little drug,

That funny little honey…

Remember that one?

I know you still have it.

 

Give it up to me.

 

Make me forget.

Make me forget why I came here.

Make me forget the journey.

Let’s just be in the present.

Tonight I don’t want your friendship.

Just be a lover.

So forget your concern.

Your poison is what I need.

 

Just a few drops…

Just slip it into my mouth.

I’ll be on my way then.

I just want the dizzy.

 

You know that you want it.

You know that it’s good for you.

You know I can make it happen.

So drop the chivalry.

I don’t need your sense of honor.

If you truly care,

You’ll make me forget.

You can do that for me honey, can’t you?

Author's Note

Reviews

[Stephen]

The poem for whom's written, am sire, he's a very lucky guy who's got the infinite drops of your pleasurable love. Some memories, pain, an ache in the heart, the value of emotions, the value given to time, the life where nights help lovers to go lost into each one's mind n so on...everything's well crafted!

You make me chuckle too with the starting but as you ended the poem, you make me feel the emotions of love as well n which's a great way to express the feelings to a reader that how amazingly the poem's written!

Keep up the great work!

[Blue Ivory]

Thanks for the great reviews! Appreciate your kind words :)

[Alexandra]

Awesome. :) I've missed your writing.

[Neville]

Hey Siren, there were several very memorable lines contained within this altogether delightful poem of yours. I echo Coyote Poetry. All good things, Neville

[Blue Ivory]

Why, thank you :)

[Neville]

No problem, N

[icelandicblue]

Oh to forget, you demand the key to oblivion with an assertiveness that borders on aggression. I really like this one, especially the change in fonts.

[Blue Ivory]

Glad you liked it :)

[Mark]

Not sure if this is about a drug or about sex... could be about either, which makes it that much more intriguing. Nice work :)

[Blue Ivory]

Thanks, I like my poetry to be open to all forms of interpretation, so take it any way you like! ;)

[Leslie Philibert]

This probably sounds very silly, but I love the use of different fonts. Herta Müller, the Nobel Prize winner used this in a collection of poems, it fuses both visual and poetic content. Like the poem, love the first line..

[Blue Ivory]

Lol well, I'm glad you like it. I consider it my signature. :)

[Anand Sehgal]

very unique style and form :) good work from you . "Khub Bhalo"

[Blue Ivory]

Lmao thank you :3

[Anand Sehgal]

I know a little bit of Bengali !

[Blue Ivory]

Impressive :)

[Leigh]

Vamma vamma boom boom, why not, sometimes its whats needed, I like the honesty of this

[Blue Ivory]

Haha! Well, that's one way to put it xD

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the thoughts and desires in the poem. Good to open doors and want to do the dance of love. I like the kind and sweet description. Made the desire come alive and well to the reader. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Baby Ricochet]

Desire's lust fueled flame strikes us all