Reaching The End

Reaching The End

I have so many friends

But what’s the point

If I’m still crying alone?

And one day, they’ll all be gone

It’ll all be over soon

 

I’m never gonna find my fairy godmother

Never get that letter from Hogwarts

Never be told was put in the wrong place by accident

In the wrong person’s skin

The Princess in the S**t Gown

 

I always waited for that life changing event

Little girl. Big dreams.

 

I’m used to being criticized and laughed at.

And I’m still here.

I made it.

I’ll make it.

 

Yet, paper is my only true confidant.

The one who hears my prayers at night.

And remembers to remind me

From time to time.

 

I have an unwavering smile

I’m too big and strong to be shaken

You can’t make me fall m**********r xD

Unless I fall on you.

Reviews

[Muse]

You've really matured. I've came to respect you not as a girl...but as a young woman. You are finally listening to all those grown-up voices. It's not easy trying to hear them all out. They will be however, beat you down if you let it...but I don't think you will be defeated "not without a fight at least" your inner beauty is too bright to become a victim of self-pity.

[Blue Ivory]

Thanks, that really means a lot.

[Subrat]

Hey it was nice one.....It means lot 4 me to be reading this piece....

[R.A. Youngblood]

This is awesome! Made my day! You released your emotions in a right way, in a hopeful, positive, powerful, strong way. The last stanza is my fav. :3 This is going to my library. Thanks for sharing, dude. :D

[Blue Ivory]

Oh, woah. It's been a while since my poetry's actually stood out to a reader I think. That last part was a reference to my obesity :P I figured, only my friends would see the humor in it.

[R.A. Youngblood]

Pfff..you're pretty good to me. :D Yeah, "I'm too big", it's funny, but pretty cool to me. Like you're being such a motherfucking badass! xD You're being strong and full of confidence, and I like that.

[Blue Ivory]

That's me BI

[R.A. Youngblood]

Yeah... :D

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Life is full of up and downs like an endless roller coaster , love the format and the humor you injected into the piece.

[Blue Ivory]

Thanks, it's amazing how one can use humor even when sad.

[icelandicblue]

There are no fairy tales but there is a certain strength in grappling with reality.

[Blue Ivory]

Thanks so much for stopping by :)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

This poem sounds like Cinderella getting her own back on the trails of like, really putting her tuppence worth of angst remarks in with style, a fine write.

[Blue Ivory]

Thank you, Sheema!

[DrD]

Defiant and bold, I like the raw undressing of the soul here and the ultimate declarations. This is Richter Scale poetry that I like because it screams of truth and raw sentiment. Very, very well done.

[Blue Ivory]

Thanks so much!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Sometimes we are let down by others... but picking up the pieces only makes you stronger...
Your mind becomes resilient in the throes of duress... when you have all but dug your way down to the bottom to hide, that is when your true self is revealed. It's cleansing to write your emotions down.... a gratifying release...Well done!

[Blue Ivory]

Thanks :3 Glad you liked it.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Well expressed, I enjoyed reading it. :)

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

I think the "I made it. I'll make it." is such a dramatic shift of thought. Also, I love the positive attitude here! ;) Lovely content and framework. May I ask? How did you make lines here? :)

P.S. I was kinda wishing for that letter from Hogwarts, too. :)

[Blue Ivory]

Oh I didn't even know there would be lines :P I was editing it on MS Word and I was picking the 3rd one from "styles" on top of the screen. I use the 2007 version. I referred to Hogwarts since I know a lot of people had that same wish. Glad you enjoyed this :)