Sorry Asses

I am but a little girl

Who has big dreams

Living in a poor home

In a bad neighborhood

In the overcrowded capital city

Of a third world country

In a world that is in debt.

Author's Note

The world really doesn't look very bright to me, sometimes :P

Reviews

[Antoñyo]

USA at its worst will always be a better place to be, learn and grow. Wherever there is more, the is more opportunity, and more chance of obtaining important things to possibly take back home even if home is a third world country. The way I see it, "some" people here that have stolen, now don't want others to come to do the same and steal from them, and to this I say, if everyone that wants a better life gets a life, we have a better chance at reaching the goal of equality...a goal this country was built on but never seems to deliver.
...so my review of the poem, "so come here!"

[Blue Ivory]

Yes, that would be the solution. Thank you. :)

[Antoñyo]

You're very welcome

[Stevo The POE-t]

Really great job here... I really enjoyed reading it... Thanks for sharing...

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

It is unfair how some people have it so easy and others have to work so hard to achieve their dreams cause they were dealt the worst hand.

[Infinite hexes]

What can I say.
I didn't really like this one, because it is too short, seemed like you just wrote for the sake of writing. Even the presentation was average. When it comes to writing, I have THE MOST HIGHEST expectations from you.

[Blue Ivory]

The highest*
And thank you.

[Blue Ivory]

I'm sorry you failed to see the depth in this one.

[Avinash]

Being aware of the Political and social reality of Bangladesh, I can completely relate to the poem. But it is the immortal soul and spirit which makes your world beautiful doesn't matter how much dread is around you. Realize the beauty of imperfection..it will bring back smile for sure.
You are very promising with your words and you own the whole world with it :)

[Blue Ivory]

Thank you, and it is nice to know that someone understands.

[Mark]

Turn up the light and make it brighter. There is always a way out.

[Frieda P]

You have a huge persona, it might not feel very bright but you have that light that shines within you....use it wisely, your poetry is a very good start Siren.

[Blue Ivory]

I'm getting so much encouragement from you guys lately, I'm almost encouraged to go along with my dreams despite the consequences :3

[Frieda P]

Be bold hon, don't know what the consequences are, you have to weigh that out for yourself...but you've got the moxy. :-) x

[Blue Ivory]

Awww thank you :3 The consequence would just be the fact that I'll never be an engineer like a typical Asian, and I won't find a good market for myself in my own country but that it'd be pretty hard for me to get to America or some other big country like that.

[Frieda P]

I don't find you 'typical' in the least Siren, having never walked in your shoes, I can't imagine what it's like but never give up hope. ♥

[BreannaAutumn]

I love how you presented this piece! It looks like something that could be on the front cover of a story

[Blue Ivory]

That's an interesting idea! Thank you :)

[BL]

If you've got dreams then you've got a lot some people don't even have those. I understand your frustrations, but dont give up

[MsJewel]

Don't ever stop dreaming. Dreams can come true. Mine did. I hope yours do too!

Hugs, Julie

[Jack...]

Siren, I can understand your outlook on the world, but you can make a difference, it may not seem like it right now, but you will see. Don't ever give up on your dreams. During my younger years, teens and 20's it was the Vietnam War and the world was in turmoil. We all had a bleak outlook, but it got better. The world goes through phases like this...just be strong, it will change.

[Blue Ivory]

Thank you for the support :)