That Voice

That Voice

So tell me, what I can do

For these hands that you used to make me?

You created me

Crafted me out of your heart

That night-

Or was it day?

 

I wouldn’t know.

I was busy dancing to your good music.

Carried away by that voice of yours…

One that twists and turns

In intricate melody

 

You have me falling in love

With your amazing sound

With that voice, you shaped me.

 

Your high frequency had me shattered.

And from the broken pieces,

You sculpted the piece of art that I am.

You put me back together

To your design

While you had me swaying

To the tune I call my anthem

 

My holy artist,

I have long hesitated

Begging you to take me

But I can handle it no longer

For your beauty exceeds

That which my eyes can behold

Dare I ask you to show yourself to me?

Or do I have you sing

My death lullaby?

Reviews

[Rahul]

I loved this font indeed and your this poem makes me crazy to read it once again...lol :)
very powerful write and this;s really well penned and the pic.'s really good which showed everything what you wanted to say by this piece through your own words.

[Speak Out]

Great write I enjoyed every line.Keep Writing

[Akashi]

A beautiful masterpiece, this is, excellency in your own style.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Hi there, such a anguished artful tribute portrayed here, very moving writing, reflecting your emotional disposition very well, excellent, well done!

[Blue Ivory]

Thank you so much for your lovely reviews :)

[FelicityAllona]

Oh my gosh Siren!! I regretted that I had only read this now!
This is really amazing! This reminds me the song of Meg and Dia entitled Masterpiece :))

Wow!!

[Blue Ivory]

Thanks so much for such a sweet review!

[FelicityAllona]

your welcome :))

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. The description took the reader to places of learning, being took apart and rebuilt. I like the internal thoughts and the ending. No weakness in the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Lexi Villanueva]

It's lovely and very interesting.

[Mark]

What is it about music that gets to us? An artist can make us feel strong emotions. Nicely written. :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Beautiful poem siren.

[FatalLullaby]

Beautifully written! I absoloutely loved your use of words and your haunting imagery :)

[Blue Ivory]

Thank you :) I am glad you liked it.