I can think of the worst thing that could have happened in this poem. At first it was my thoughts but other thoughts made me think of how I don't always like for people to get close to me and I keep them at arms length so they can't touch me but every now and then someone breaks through and they reach me. Surprised at times, sometimes a little peeved they figured me out and I wonder how they did it.
Why indeed? It is sometimes a wish of mine to take all the hurt in the human race and throw it at the night sky where it might hit the sun as it rises and burn away. But then, how would we ever really know what joy is?
Your free verse uniquely reflects the confusion within the narrator (starting with 'sdrawkcab' as i don't think there has been anyone to play this amusing trick). =)
I am assuming the 'venom' is referred to as 'love' or 'infatuation'. It depicts this perception curtly and lucidly with the difficulty of controlling emotions willfully. A lovely read this is!
I can think of the worst thing that could have happened in this poem. At first it was my thoughts but other thoughts made me think of how I don't always like for people to get close to me and I keep them at arms length so they can't touch me but every now and then someone breaks through and they reach me. Surprised at times, sometimes a little peeved they figured me out and I wonder how they did it.
well..twisted mind that I have I did not see backwards written backwards..I saw an anagram of drawbacks Still a very interesting poem that i suppose could have many interpretations
Thanks and I really do wish I could write backwards in a better way it's just my computer wouldn't a.. read moreThanks and I really do wish I could write backwards in a better way it's just my computer wouldn't allow it. It had many people confused -_-
11 Years Ago
I love to play with words and your poem intrigued me..I am going to try a backwards poem myself..
confusing as to what your are trying to say. explain?
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11 Years Ago
Well in my religion, reading verses backwards causes black magic. This was about spiritual conflict... read moreWell in my religion, reading verses backwards causes black magic. This was about spiritual conflict. About how lots of people our age "switch sides". It can be consuming. Also, tattoos are forbidden: ink stains on my body. And you know how they keep saying lots of things are Satanic? So it gets confusing trying to find what's right and what's wrong. And that makes us realize we;'re not as mature as we are, and we feel like innocent little children. That's pretty much it. Thanks for reading it though!
11 Years Ago
what religion are you?
11 Years Ago
Muslim :)
11 Years Ago
o very nice :) im agnostic myse;f, but i love learning about other religions and culturess
I am a sugarcoated wreck. A cupcake with a chipped human tooth baked inside it. I breathe out soot left behind by the corpses you tried to bury but I come to you served in a silver platter.
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