The Snow Queen

I'm naked
But you're a mist
So they can't see
And you surround me.

I'm dripping
I'm cold.
It's winter.
But I'm wet.
Still, you're a mist.
So they can't see
How you choke me.

These are simple words, right?

I laugh dryly.
It's carried by icy vapor.
To the others, I exist as but a sound.

I go to them in nightmares.
As a soft whisper.
They say I'm their dream girl-
A damsel in distress.

They write poetry in my name.

FOOLS!

What good will that do me?

I'm trapped here in eternal pain.

Free me.

I am your fantasy. Or so you think.

Tell me, if you love me so much,
Why did you never bother
Looking for me in reality?

What's this fine line between us?
Can lovers never meet?

I am your goddess.
I command you to free me!
I BEG you to free me.

But you can't hear me, can you?

You can. But you refuse to believe it.
I'm just the whispering wind.
And my form is just a blizzard.

But I'll be taking you with me.

Reviews

[pinhead07]

This is really nice. Really liked it. So many layers to it too. Love, the hopelessness of it, how it tears one away, emotional turmoil, how it's all around, like air, but you can't touch it, which drives one insane, in the end, the force of it but like a goddess. Beckoning. Yet you go to it, it takes you with it... :p

[R.A. Youngblood]

This is so creative and relaxing, powerful! I like it!
Thanks for sharing..Keep it up! :D

[Blue Ivory]

Glad you liked it :)

[R.A. Youngblood]

:D

[DrD]

You not only write but you make a show of your writings and that is not only creative and original, but urges the reader onward. I like it very much. But the content is almost eerie in its tugging at our curiosity and drawing us into somewhere we feel like we should not go. I don't know if your poem is dangerous or if you are, Siren. But I enjoyed this very much.

[Blue Ivory]

lol, imagination is a door many will say should never be opened! It tends to take over us ;)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I love the icy vapors and mist references... being here but not completely whole and not capable of giving love at the moment... the knight always wants to save the damsel but in reality she needs to save herself. Your writing is spectacular.

[Blue Ivory]

Thank you! :3

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

My pleasure :)

[amarlaksh]

Wow Its just so intense. I wish i could write like this.

[Blue Ivory]

Awww don't say that! I love your work! C:

[amarlaksh]

no its your maturity that i don't have! :)

[Blue Ivory]

Thank you :)