Our Little Secret

People say I should let it go.
It's all in the past, so I should put it behind me.
But no.
I want you to wrap around me.
And trace me with your fingertips...


If you can be my shadow,
What happens in the day?
If you can whisper into my ears
Why can't I speak them out loud?

You shush me,
You soothe me.
Then why are your hands so cold?

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.......

Let the humming never stop...
It's OK baby
Our love can stay a secret.

Reviews

If the two in this poem need to be together when it's a secret or not, their love shall shine... what a beautiful poem...

"
If you can be my shadow,
What happens in the day?
If you can whisper into my ears
Why can't I speak them out loud?"

Such a vivid imagery Siren.
Nice work.

E.L.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Love knows no bounds even when it is forbidden... what matter is what the two involve feel... even hiding in the dark love will always shine.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

There is something intriguing about a secret. You have weaved a mysterious web around your lover...I wonder why his hands are cold. Could it be that the warmth is lost, with no sun to shine, hidden in the day? A Lovely write!

[DrD]

Much of this is left to the reader to interpret and that's always an interest grabber. Well formed and original, it brings its message in nostalgic tones and becomes an excellent read.